Well, damn.. That's a shame, this story was really getting good.

Well the first day of school ended for everyone with mixed results. I hadn't expected Gwen, Marsha and Allie to pop up, but with how this story's going, it just adds to how things'll change for everyone.

It was incredibly heartwarming to see Lynn not give up the ghost on what his kids did at the funeral. Rather nice to see Clyde and the others the kids' parents knew offer their condolences as well, and seeing London eventually apologize for lashing out because of the flowers and everyone making up made for a nice ending here. It's been clearly a struggle for everyone, but it will get better for them in time, this much I truly believe.

This was good. Thanks.

As expected, things are tense between Lynn and the kids, but things'll get better with time. Got a good laugh out of that bit with Victory and Leia, same with Loan and London. I feel for Lemy missing his mom for that extra motivation, but as long as he holds onto his memories of her cheering him on, he'll be fine.

Rather surprised that Lynn ended up being more reasonable with the kids than I thought, though it does help that Lyra and Liena offered to help as well, so that does help smooth things along. Lemy's justifiably upset with how everyone else has reacted to everything that's happened, although his sisters have the right to react in their own ways.

Really solid work here, looking forward to more from you!

It's going to be a good while before Lynn warms up to his grand kids and vice versa, isn't it?

Got to admit, I never thought I'd see a setup for a story like this. I'm intrigued by what's to come of Lynn looking after his grand kids, regardless of how he felt about their origins..

Oh my gosh, please continue this! Please don't end up cancelling this story for any reason. This is such an interesting plot that needs to be seen to the end.

This story is enjoyable to read and I hope there's more coming soon.

I do hope you have something big planned for us when it comes to the Sin Kids. They never asked to be born and Lynn most definitely knows this.

Maybe in the future, Lynn gets into contact with the social services and finds out about some sort of plot twist, but maybe not.

so is lulu alive in this story?

I'm expecting more of this, please keep going.

Death by drunk driver is unfortunately very common in this world. Though killing 11 adults with one car sounds very unrealistic. A sedan versus a van? The sedan will take more damage unless they were veered off the road.