This was brilliant beyond words
Subtle and powerful and moving and I loved it!
Thanks for sharing

That was excellent. It could be a full story, you know...

Awesome

Aww, Tom is kind of adorable in his wonderment. I wonder- would there ever be a sequel to this? Where Tom meets Harry again? perhaps, he could travel through worlds with Harry, so Harry wouldn't be alone?

Amazing story; it was well paced and well written. I’d love to read more on this, whether it’s Harry returning/continuing or on the exploits of this Tom.

I really enjoy your writing style. The balance between narration and dialogue was perfect; I never had so much narration that I grew tired, frustrated, or was taken out of the story. And the dialogue was intriguing and relevant to the plot, or developed the characters.

Really really nice!

This is a very interesting plot. Please write more!

Harry must be tired from traveling, but still maintains his goal to ensure Tom is better then Voldie. It be interesting to see Harry revisit the world's after to see what his changes have done. Love this. Write On!

Yes, retired means retired.

Delightful!

Wow.
Its so short and yet at the end when Harry leaves it is so pointed and sharp and sad... Tom is so changed and yet so the same... I hope Tom gets to find a few people who aren't pure followers as he waits for Harry

I'm not sure giving Tom that thread of hope was a good thing... this is Tom, after all. He might get it into his head that he can't be sure when Harry will return, even if he becomes Minister. Or he might decide, after decades of disappointment, that the only way he'll certainly see Harry again is if he lives until the universe ends. Or... perhaps it will be less about Harry and more about the excuse to pursue his instinctual desire for immortality and hatred of death. One way or another, Tom's gaze might turn toward Horcruxes...

Oh well. Tom will be Tom. This way, at least, he has a *chance* of redemption.

A good story. I'm honestly glad that you seem to have taken an interest in exploring possibilities involving Tom Riddle and Tom and Harry in particular. It's been a treat seeing your recent stories along those lines and I look forward to any others.

Very good.

Brilliant story!

I like it.
... Based on most fanfiction I have read, it seems that only way to 'reform' Riddle is to give him a 'healthier' obsession.