| Reviews for Northborn |
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yesboss21 chapter 18 . 8/20 I will be thrilled if Angrod will make contact with the Company of the Rose, see maybe making a contract with them to harden even more the free folk...and due to this, is he going to experience his name sake and be implanted with the butcher nail or something |
Poseidon3000 chapter 18 . 8/20 good fic |
Raltol Lotlar chapter 2 . 8/10 The fact that he has the blood of those narcissist, crazy, incest obsesed that the only thing that they love more than there sisters is fire kill the story for me. And here I was hoping to see a story far away of those f-, he could have blood from the first men, thenn or even giants if you wanted something special. |
javi30 chapter 18 . 8/6 Very good chapter. Keep writing. Blessings and good health to you and your loved ones. |
Lord Mortensen chapter 18 . 8/1 Cool! please update soon! |
Josh b chapter 18 . 7/30 Loved this chapter so much would love it if he had another confrontation with Euron or steels a fleet of ships to make a trip home to get more free folk |
Guest chapter 18 . 7/30 Great chapter cannot wait for next update |
Dzerx chapter 18 . 7/30 this protagonist is honestly proving to be an idiot so far. |
Dzerx chapter 13 . 7/30 Technically he'd be a true Targaryen as all the great bustards (including Brynden Rivers) were legitimised. |
Spartan3909 chapter 18 . 7/30 Thanks for the chapter _. |
osterreicher97 chapter 18 . 7/29 I always thought the Warlocks were a bunch of pussies, honestly. Them and the Faceless Men though at least the Faceless Men aren't a bunch of filthy scavengers. |
Willem Trialmont chapter 17 . 7/10 Your writing style is improving, but you still seem to have issues with grammar, punctuation, formatting and capitalization. Now this may well be because you're writing on your phone, and it's a pain in the ass to proofread and format anything correctly on it, however give it a bit more effort your work deserves it. The premise of the story is interesting, the main character is as well. It reminds me of the fic "The Difference One Man Can Make". Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to what comes next. |
Kulha chapter 17 . 7/6 I was expecting a trip overseas, not... well, ice spiders and vague myths and magic. Also, you can't be old when the world was young unless you're an alien. It takes ages for the world to cool down and any kind of life to spawn. Since the MC is from our world I would expect him to call that kind of shit out. |
Sakra95 chapter 16 . 7/5 I really hope the giants are used well in this story since the MC has a modern mind. In the show they really undersold them. Imagine the giants with large wooden shields, they would make an impenetrable shield wall formation and like in the show where one was armed with a bow if you can arm some more of them they can act as mobile ballistas. |
Sakra95 chapter 17 . 7/5 It's a good story with an interesting concept. It would be really great if you have him trade with Bravos and other cities in Essos since they won't care if he is a wildling just how they can profit. BTW how did Mance immediately recognize him as a Targaryen descendant. Will he tame Cannibal since he has been dreaming about him and who will you pair him with? I hope he gets paired with someone from a noble family or even Daenerys if he manages to tame or hatch a dragon. |