Cute

Oh wow! I loved this!

I enjoyed the slightly different characterizations/feel of this. It felt sort of like a movie? Or more grown-up? I don’t know what I’m saying except that the vibe felt a bit unfamiliar but I liked it anyway!

Awwwwww I love how hermione helps him.

Loved it

Very good! I liked it!

Really enjoyed this!

I got to the bottom, went to hit the next chapter link, and was saddened to find that there was not a "next chapter". Should you ever decide to add onto this story and explore Draco's control over the invisibility, especially during intimate moments, I think the outcome would be well worth it. I'm following this story just in case. ;) Cheers.

This was a really different story I enjoy reading it very much.

So good! And different!

I loved this. It's sad that Draco misinterprets Hermione's response to his flirting. I wonder how often that happens in real life. I enjoyed seeing his inner thoughts. I love a Dramione that gives a lot of Draco's thoughts.

Fantastic creature Draco story. I loved his vulnerability and that Hermione made the first move. A sequel would be lovely to read. So many humorous situations could arise with Draco being able to control his invisibility! Naughty ones too! Lol.

What a fun story! I would love to see how vanishing during sex goes. Thank you for sharing this with us!

Fantastic story! I loved how you worked Draco’s vulnerability into his invisibility. And that conversation with Hermione where he admitted his fears was beautiful. Seeing things working out when he finally made the decision to do the right thing was a wonderful touch. And now I’m going to imagine him disappearing in the middle of sex. Very kinky, LOL

Loved this!