That was fun kinda hoping naruto gains some more versatile control over his magic as if the gamer manga is to be taken seriously mana is just as if not more versatile then chakra.

Btw should definitely read the gamer if you get the chance in a manga reader if your remove the rpg aspects and the protagonist seeming to be denser then naruto in several different ways there's a lot of interesting stuff to inspire you.

Well, dropped. To be honest the whole making Haku a trans made me want to drop it there and then. I call those things, ITs, and they should be avoided at all costs. But making this into one of those crappy magic things ruined it completely.

So he got majorly nerfed and is still supposed to "save" the world? Thats impossible. He might as well just give up and die again.

Ok so I've played 3 4 and 5 is he the fool or the world and is there a confidant system or just allies is this gonna like nocturne and if dark and weird or like strange journey dark weird and hard as hell

Hmm where did you get this naming system for magic?

Dang rip obito

oooooooh interesting! I came wait wait for more

interested...

would love it if Naruto gained Shinigami powers from bleach and had a zanpakuto...

afterall he was just directly touched by death

Probably not you want to read but I would not have written the first part of the chapter. It's not the first "back in time" fic of this website and I've read variations of this opening a thousand times. "Madara is an OP, retarded mistake of a bad plot created by dumbass Kishimoto, a losing battle ensues, Naruto jumps back in the past".
It does not bring anything new to the table.

Rather, beginning with Naruto realizing he is in the past and us readers slowly discovering what happened would have been more original in the presentation. See what I mean? That would have also allowed you to tease the God (why Jashin though? Why not the Shinigami? Especially considering you're linking the Uzumaki with Death) and the pact he made with Naruto.

There is this one potentially interesting idea with Naruto's sudden chakra problem. I just hope it's not about giving Naruto those bullshit jashinist powers, 'cause those are frankly bad taste.

Best writing to you,