That was one of the funniest things I've ever read! You should write more often

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ROFLMAO!

genius.

LOL! This is so true! Most NC-17 fanfictions seem the same to me ( with the exception of a few that actually have plots )! Anyhow, I cracked up the Tobey McGuire part! LOL!

-a little helpful review that may one day be broadcasted a thousand years from now on History Chann., Goth_Cat! .

Err... That was, err, a really weird fic, I might say... Lol. But I absolutely loved it, I swear! Ahahaha! You're good at writing those parodies, or at least this fic makes it look like it.

you forgot only one cliche the one i hate the most. the dread 'did i just call (s)he hot?' in which bulma/ vegeta accidentlly thinks the other has a hot ass/ is sexy/ etc. and then goes 'NO! I DIDN'T JUST DO THAT!' i HATE that.

Hee hee! This story is so funny. I love it!

That was truly funny! I loved it! One of the best spoofs ever written!

LOL!

That was absolutely to the point, even the style you used seemed familiar!

I mean, who isn t unnerved by all those 13-year-olds (ab)using our favourite anime characters to write about about their twisted fantasies of what sex will be like...

Great parody!

I must say, you're the most critical bitch I've come across thusfar on . Call this a flame if you want, I don't really give a fuck. Smut written work? Not everyone starts off as a "magnificent" a writer as you may have, which I'm sure you haven't. Not everyone believes in the things you do, which are very narrow minded, though you may not think so yourself. I can't believe I ever admired you, I sure as hell don't anymore after reading this fiction. You're praised too much, and "you" yourself, let that get to your head. Wake up, and think about your previous actions, girl, please. Because right now, you're seeming like an absolutely horrid person.

OMG! That was so funny! I couldn't stop laughing. *wipes away a few tears* Oh man.. that's just wonderful. This goes on my favorites list for sure! *still laughing*

POAS

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so sad… so funny… so blunt… so true…

That’s about all I can say without listing every single blunt-true line in the whole fiction… which was just about every line, anyway.

Oh my gosh, I’m so floored. I’ve read my fair share of B/V fictions, and I think you just highlighted so many frickin’ clichés that I’d be mad to try to list them. There is one, though, that I could name a few dozen fictions that are guilty of; ["I love you. Earlier today I hated your guts and didn't even have borderline lukewarm feelings for you, even though you have a really nice derriere. But now I'm madly and passionately in love with you."] — And there you have it, one of the most unbelievable fiction-plots that I have ever read, and I’m delighted that you included it.

My goodness, I won’t be forgetting this fiction in quite some time.

But good on you for creating a fiction like this. It is the first of its kind that I have read, and thank goodness that at least one person has the sense to see the real picture. I think I’ll find some more spoofs and read them after I finish reviewing.

My gosh, I have nothing left to say, except that you should move onto another section and write a cliché-filled parody again, because THAT was just… too frank for words.

I’m going to put you down on my favourite’s list, both of them, because you truly deserve it. Thank you for opening my eyes just that little further. Best wishes and good luck to you and your works.

Ishi Ban

HaHAAHAAHA! Shit, that was funny.

Pretty good. I just wish that a really bad B/V writer would read this and realize that there's really more to the whole thing. Love isn't all about sex. Yamcha is not as bad as people make him out to be. Lemons don't get things right. Generally they make everyone into cardboard cutouts of their true selves, a bunch of caricatures, pointing out some true things and leaving out the rest.

Thanks for the humor.

Sincerely,

Acey

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Oh...this is just e-vil!

And I love it. If you ever get around to expanding on this fic...please include that J.D. Sylvia went on to create a bio page that lists all of her favorite things. And I mean ALL of them! Favorite food, fav high-school class, fav color, fav shop in the Mall, fav made-up sexual position...etc...

"...filled with Warm And Fuzzy Feelings, I might as well just screw her. It. I mean, screw it. Yeah. Emotions are a weakness. Sex is bad. I'm all over her. It. All over IT. Goddammit!"

*ROFLMAO* XD I Love this fic! It's hilarious! Great job _