Interesting take, I don’t really mind the PWP bit, it’s the blatant manipulation that Gallant and the OC are doing and the age gap between the OC and Victoria I find a little skeevy.

good story

Good chapter, but I thought he fixed Vicky's Dad's depression?

uuuh whats alans power again?

Hmmmmm good goood

Ehhhhh this is pretty damn good, nice job dude!

Noooiiice. I like it. Never thought of Deans power that way

U really like the idea of having sex with Taylor, don't you? Even in a story where she had nothing to do with Dean, he actively sought her out and smashed her, mostly because the MC wouldn't do it with his loyalty to Glory Girl.

Please kill of Dean in the story, i simply put don't like him as a character at all..

Good Chapter!

Yeah, it's Worm alright...

Very good

Yeah noce

So this guy is pretty much a rapist. Crushing on an underage girl for two years despite being nearly twice her age at the time, then causally pushing past her subjection when she is obviously uncomfortable. The idea is nice but the story is ruined by making it essentially porn.

Heeee noce