No! I must read the ending! Great story

Any chance you'll return to this? I'm finding this quite an interesting add on to the episode.

Love this! Looking forward to more

This is a really good story, only spoiled (for me and maybe other readers?) by the use of the ‘f’ word. Please continue as time permits,- without the ‘f’ word? Thank you.

Just watched this episode again so great to find this take on events. Look forward to the next chapter

This is excellent. Looking forward to new chapters!

This is superb. Can't wait for more.

Lawrie's abduction of Robbie, mocking the police, and delivering the ultimate terror to Laura are so in character. I still have faith in James, Jean, Laura, and Robbie most of all, to come through this. Looking forward to a happy ending. Our favorite couple always seems to take the most difficult road and many detours to get there.

Loving this. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Well, that was intense!

Well now, this is certainly an intriguing and frightening beginning. The terror Laura must be feeling about losing Robbie must rank right up there with almost being buried alive. I will trust James to sort this out for everyone.

Oh, yes please, DO post the rest! This is really tremendous and thank you for writing it.

yes please post the rest

Nice to see a new Lewis fanfic. Great start

Great start, looking forward to more but not going to lie I’m a little worried for our beloved Robbie!