I can't believe I just now found this fic! I loved it so much

Oh my gosh, I LOVED this story. And I wholeheartedly agree with the changes you made, especially concerning Makarov and August. This was beautifully written and you captured these characters wonderfully. A quality lemons as well!

This is definitely one of my top favourite canon-verse nalu fics!

Rarely ever do I find a fan fiction that reads like an actual book. Here I am 4 chapters in and I just want to say that you have a gift for writing.

i love this fic so much you don't even know. and your note at the end of this? couldnt agree more. irene and anna were underused as hell and there should've been more there... and august... well that was shock value there was no MEANING really behind his being zeref-mavis's kid. so i liked what you did better. and i DEFINITELY love what you did with irene in this. her suicide made zero sense to me in the series because... why would she run herself through w a sword after realizing she did in fact love/had loved her daughter? irene doesn't come off as someone who takes life lightly so i would've liked if she'd just withdrawn the spell or something because she was overwhelmed... THAT SAID i love the way you handled it in this simply because you stuck the key event - irene dying - but made it mean so much more

ugh jesus mest made me so mad when this happened, what a little shit

Woaah. I love it! I love everything!

I like how you wrote about Natsu and Lucy scene from your POV!

Thanks so much for all the work you put into this fic! I did like your changes. The one I liked most was August’s story because I felt sooo badly for him that his life ended so bleakly, saving a mom who never knew him and never receiving love from his dad. Also, it didn’t make sense as to how he could’ve been made because Mavis died when Zeref just kissed her. I also like that you gave Irene a more humane character and had her sacrifice herself. In the anime, I was completely outraged when Mest did that utterly idiotic act of betrayal and ruined everything. I wanted to strangle him. So it’s good he at least apologized. And yes I agree that Anna did this huge time traveling thing only to be useless in the future so I’m glad you wrote it in. Natsu and Lucy’s scenes also make it have more sense as to why he was so calm seeing her naked under the blanket. I also really loved the scene when Lucy was glowing and Natsu brought her back. They are so meant for each other. I love the both of them so much. It was so frustrating how the other character love stories got so much more development and GaLevy has that magnificent episode where they confessed their love for each other and NaLu has had very little, despite being the main pairing of the show! Natsu should’ve at least hugged Lucy when she risked her life saving him and rewriting his future. Or Lucy should’ve ran to hug him in the anime. I was like seriouslyyyy so lacking in NaLu moments. Hence the fanfic reading lol. Great fic please keep writing!

Another great chapter!

I want to see more moments between them!

Omg I absolutely love this chapter

Another great chapter!

Omg I love this chapter!

Is this story is complete in just two days?

I really love your fic. Usually i will hate reading some same or similiar story with the real one. Because its just tooo boring to read again all of these.

But, with this fict i found that i willing to read it word by word so i can feel deep down the story you show us.

And i really love how you 'fixed' things. The other author will use they ego so they fanfict will go with they own desire. Not because the real story or character. But nah, you do it right. I agree that mashima leave a lotttttttt opportunity to make this manga way more beloved. Its like he rushed thing to end. And once more, i loved it and i agree that you change the important thing. Well the one that a little sad irene is still dead even though she's a wonderfull mother and i will love to see how she and erza interact to each other.

Oh my i write this so long, im sorry. Keep write, and one more, dont just upload your story in rushed like this. Take time okay? The other will see this story and they will feel the story more if you take time to update.

Thank you

Will there be more Nalu stories, you'll probably end up making, in the future? I hope to see more from you!