| Reviews for Echo: the First Son of the Amazons |
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multyfangirl21 chapter 1 . 6/6 Jason? You mean Jason and the Argonauts? the hero Jason that was favored by Hara? He wasn't a demigod if that's the one you mean. He was one of the normal human heros that had the favor of one or more gods. |
YeTianshi chapter 2 . 6/3 Damn, I wonder how Harry will turn out. It was a pretty good chapter :D |
YeTianshi chapter 1 . 6/3 Yo! I came here after reading "The Lightning-Struck Soldier", decided that if you've written one amazing piece of fiction, you've probably written more. Glad to say I was not mistaken :D |
millerr123 chapter 2 . 5/30 Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update this story because it is such a brilliant story and I couldn't stop reading it. |
gemm1mt chapter 2 . 5/28 Please update this when you can. Pleaaase. |
Unbenannt chapter 1 . 4/6 Have you read the Sons of themyscira storyline? Its really dark and would be a perfect fit for this lol. |
Fax15 chapter 2 . 3/21 Gran capĂtulo Pd: wonderbat es lo mejor del mundo |
FeelDatAster chapter 2 . 2/3 AHHHHHH! PLZ UPDATE |
IWantABetterWebsite chapter 2 . 1/17 Decent start so far. I look forward to seeing where this goes. Three small nitpicks from the first chapter: First, early on, Diana makes a reference to "Auror-folk," but later it's clear that she knows nothing about the magical world. Second, you are inconsistent about her speed. You said that her destination was 50 miles away and it took 1.5 minutes to get there. That means she was travelling at 2000 mph. But you also say she was going about the speed of a car and that she was slower than usual because Harry was there. Finally, the "WonderWoMOM" bit seems unrealistic. Even if she was only travelling at around 40 mph, that would still be too fast to get a really clear photo, especially in the dark and with her probably flying decently high up. And even if someone did somehow get a picture of her, it probably wouldn't take off that much. It's not like she's never saved a baby before. |
SoulHue chapter 1 . 1/16 Really great start I can wait for you to have more chapters so I can really get immersed in the world your going to create. And I love how green arrow came in and commented on how Harry looked like the second coming because that pretty much what he was for magical Britain. |
Guest chapter 2 . 1/7 Really enjoyed these first chapters. In particular, the way you have portrayed the DC characters. I suppose you could add some paragraphs to describe them more. Minor detail. Looking forward to see what happens next. |
Ana Luisa chapter 2 . 1/6 Hermoso bello muy bien |
Ana Luisa chapter 1 . 1/6 Excelente comienzo de la historia |
Procrastinating Panda chapter 2 . 1/7 Great start! No criticism yet so just holding out for more right now! |
Coin Master chapter 2 . 1/7 Really good chapter again, glad you decided to post it, cant wait for the next one! Keep up the good work! |