Ah those two...lol... Theo and the MC (Mai) are a riot.

I'm glad that this chapter's a tad longer than the first one and still as good! Looking forward to more adds to the story, seeing that you've done a great job capturing the essence of the canon characters.

Please write sequels for both chapters, they're wonderful!

Gotta love Theo:') Great little one-shot!

This was so cute! I loved the banter, the allusions to Alice and Wonderland and the White Rabbit (and ohhhhh I imagine Theo would *not* care for that comparison!). And the touch of romance was a pleasant surprise as well!
Also...totally cracked up when MC referred to Arthur as their " literary Lothario" ;-)

This was a lovely and enjoyable read! While I'm not playing/using/into this particular Ikemen product (whatever it's classified as, I dunno) I'm still a big fan of your writing.

They glowered briefly at each other, but there was nothing in it-just an ordinary exchange of 'civilities' in Paris of the nineteenth century.

Having a glare that parted crowds like Moses parting the Red Sea was a bonus.

I'd show more clever bits I loved except this website does not allow copy past on desktop. Boo! And I loved the thought of Theo in White Rabbit cosplay. LOL

I loved everything you wrote and will happily await more of whatever you grace us with. :D Fabulous!

you capture their characters really well in your writing! keep up the great work!

Theo is such an ass and I love it. I really like how you build the tension between the three characters, and would love to see more interactions between them.

I just barely got into IkeVamp myself and can't help but fawn over Leonardo and Comte Saint-Germain. That's a love triangle just waiting to happen imo.

Oops! Forgot to mention in my AO3 review that “Snork” took me back to my childhood and a tv show I haven’t though of in years XD Anyway, this was cute and fun! as always, nicely done!

So, if I were so inclined and pressed for more of this fine story, you might write a picnic and shenanigans? I'm fine with Mai with either or both of the handsome Dutch brothers.

I enjoyed the conversations and teasing by-plays. I can't help but think of a certain other hell of a butler named Sebastian when I read this... Now that, might induce a wild 4 person picnic scene.

This story was finely written and I hope to see more of your writing, for this and any other fandom you so desire. Thanks for sharing your talent!