First of all. I loved the story. It made me laugh and i literally binge read it in one go because of it.
And second of all. . . I never really gave alot of thoughs to Neo x Ruby.. But now you made me ship it.

The semblance you gave Roman actually makes perfect sense for him, I like it.

Well, that was a great read. I definitely enjoyed it. Great job.

This story is great...

This was one of the best stories I've read in a long time. The humor was great, and I liked how you told the story and how things turned out. Also, Chew is best doggo-fight me.

If you ask me it's a sign of a good writer to know when to stop, and I'm glad you did it when you did. Any more would've been too much and might've ruined the story. Only really a couple of things to criticize really. Spelling errors, which is to be a given at times, it hardly happened so great job. (My advise would be rereading it if you don't already. Always find stuff I mess up or want to make/phrase better that way.) The actual start of the romance between Roman and Glynda is another. In my opinion it seemed a little rushed (for a lack of a better term), but it didn't seem forced at least, and the rest of it was great.

The only other thing I'm really curious about for no apparent reason is Penny. I'd assume she was still friends with the group, but for whatever reason I'm surprised she wasn't at the epilogue. I mean she's still probably in Atlas and wasn't really a "MC" in this story, but idk. Weird thoughts and whatnot.

It's hard at times writing reviews and trying not to spoil anything, but I always hate it when people do that. Ruins the story some when you know what's coming. Anyway, great job and I'll be looking forward to your next story.

Oh man, that omake works so well! This story just keeps on keeping on

Roman and Glynda tag-teaming Ozpin and giving him shit for all the shenanigans he does is totally 10/10

I started reading this, and i like this a lot, and your quote "Poor Cinder. Maybe if you were an interesting character that was actually capable of death instead of having more plot armor than Jaune's new haircut I'd write about you more."

I can totally dig it.

A wholesome ending to a fun story, it's these fluff fics that put a smile on my face and make me forget that there is an angry witch queen of darkness heading to atlas, on a side note they are a large step closer uniting humanity so I would guess in a few short generations when Roman had log passed Salem would be brave enough to let Ozpin unite the relics but that's just me thinking. Excellent conclusion to your story, look forward to your future works.

This was a sweet end. Awesome fanfic XD Tbh though i wished willow and roman had kid or kids XD Wouldve been hilarious XD

Okay, this is easily the best RWBY story I've read in a while, and with a freaking hilarious resolution. Definitely gonna read it again sometime

All in all, pretty damn fun and well done.

I am so happy that I found this story and it has been a treat to follow it D

I’m sorry but the 1st chapter was way too funny XD keep it up.

Well this has been a long journey that has come to a full end, and hey Roman survived after all (even if he didn't it'd still be better than being eaten by a Griffon...then again it was a rather quick end) so thanks for making this story fun and funny for us to enjoy.

I might have to re-read this again.