| Reviews for On the Brink |
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   Horsegirl01 chapter 6 . 12/15/2019 Looking forward to the next update! I enjoyed this. |
| VTK chapter 6 . 10/12/2019 I’m a sap too :) Thank you for letting Calelon live! |
| ForestWren chapter 6 . 10/11/2019 Yay! He woke up! That ending had me so happy. And Elrond laughing at Legolas was awesome! This chapter was amazing. Thank you! |
| Mustard Lady chapter 6 . 10/10/2019 Thank goodness. Yes, please post the next chapter as soon as it's ready! |
| JulsaIthil chapter 5 . 9/30/2019 Wow Legolas is opening up bit by bit! |
| Mustard Lady chapter 5 . 9/30/2019 Let's hope his friend survives. Aww. Well, I'm glad he told them the truth, even though he can't share everything yet and that's okay. He's not alone now. Glad he realizes that! |
| Scribbles-on-Parchment chapter 5 . 9/30/2019 Good chapter. Keep it up! I cant wait for the next one! I hope Calelon is ok |
| Horsegirl01 chapter 4 . 9/30/2019 I am enjoying reading this story. I hope to read more from you soon! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/17/2019 Please post the next chapter |
| ForestWren chapter 4 . 9/19/2019 WHAT. That last line... aaaahh! Extremely serious cliffhanger right there! You have succeeded in confusing my family; when I read that I gasped out loud! My sister asked me what was wrong, but I couldn't explain :) Aaah! Now I've got that out of my system (mostly), very nice chapter! I like all of the flashbacks giving things more backstory. I feel so sorry for Legolas! And Calelon... Great work so far! Looking forward to the next chapter! |
| JulsaIthil chapter 4 . 9/17/2019 Hi Bob! I like your line breaks. Like a foreshadowing. What! I was growing to like that elf! Don’t kill him of!? |
| Mustard Lady chapter 4 . 9/17/2019 Can't blame Legolas for going out of control, hating and wanting to destroy as much as he could of the beasts that killed his mother. But that must have been disturbing to witness. Oh, no! Calelon! Noo! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/9/2019 Great Chapter! Legolas internal struggle “Can't you see I'm trying? Can't you see that every day, I look at my friends and I want to scream? Can't you see that I know that I'm hurting them but I can't stop? ...” bring back memories of my own loss and trying hard to be there for my family. Thank you for sharing. |
| Therese chapter 3 . 9/7/2019 Please update it is a very good story |
| LunaLover04 chapter 1 . 9/7/2019 This has increadably high potential, and so far, I’ve been impressed. If I was to nitpick I would say that the story does a lot telling and less of showing. But there are some fantastic ideas in here about a son mourning and blaming himself for his mother’s death. Keep doing a great job and I’m excited to see more |
