Very nice.

STUPENDOUS WORK! LOVED THE FLUFF FEELS AND HEARTWARMING MOMENTS!

CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT CHAPTER STORY!

Nice story! Real touching and emotional. But how come Hyzenthlay is Holly's mate here? Is it based on the miniseries canon? But, if I recall, Holly died in that adaptation. Still, it's a beautiful short story.

Keep up the good work!

Well. This was a very deep story. Suicide is never the answer and this story shows it. Everyone is put on Earth for a purpose. Holly is a true savior, not for those in danger but those who are danger to themselves. A brilliant story with strong impacts.

Nice to see another one-shot from you :)
This is probably your darkest one so far. No matter what, suicide is never the answer.

It's great that Holly managed to save the narrator; the conversation between the two that follows was really well-written. This appears to be taking place in an alternate universe where Hyzenthlay saved Holly during the final battle, this is honestly pretty great. The final scene was also really nice.

Pretty good starting for this new story.