When the writer says that u have to wait 2 months for another chapter:

Me: THE DESPAIR

It’ll be interesting to see how people like Tsumiki, Riruka, and Seiko will develop when they are older with Naegi assisting with some of their internal isssues from their childhood. Thanks for the chapter.

well done on this one you did well showing what an early mikan would be while still developing the behaviors she had in cannon showing she is still in need of help but its not as deeply entrenched as in cannon

So I only there will be one chapter every two months... I can feel the despair... but well I'll have to see how to manage my patience, this story improves with each chapter, and in these chapters where I can see more interaction between everyone I like them, I hope to read more again... but have to wait.

Excellent as always!

I want to read about the free time of mikan, seiko and kiriko this last one needs more characterization and I would like to see how it gets closer to makoto ... and especially a jealous natsumi.
Now I have to wait until the next chapter.

this was nice mikan is good kid though her backstory is pretty rough and if she has gotten to this point some serious shit may have already happened to her.

With it being said she was abused in many ways including sexually and that she gain her shsl talent by her patching herself up after the abuse on her own makoto may be in for a sight of the uglier side of humanity

Mikan! Yay!

i truly wasn’t expecting natsumi to be included in this! what an interesting turn of events.

interesting prologue. i like the direction this fic is taking so far

this was cute keep it up

Excellent work!

It’s a slow pace, but you’re doing pretty good, though an hope you abandon the harem list thing once it gets big enough, there are a large amount of girls in DR, whether or not if you’re including them all.

Well done, Bro! The story is getting really interesting.

Now i want to see that harem list grow