Enjoyed the start, w/mention of who Sofia spent time with. What a mini-crisis, with Cedric's disaster. I liked Sofia helping, then insisting on his taking time off.

edit: (chimed) in cheerfully.

Nice description of Cedric's discomfort in walking on the beach, then just being in swimming trunks. Fun writing of her swimming, the sandcastles, and the meal. What a twist w/her getting caught in that riptide, and no Amulet to help her. Solid rescue from Cedric, but quite the situation w/the lost Amulet.

And what a solution! I like the magic transfer theory. Well done, once again!

Very sweet and interesting I enjoyed it.

Lmaoooo, Poor Cedric, l dyed laughing when Sofia tried to change him into his swimwear, lol it was so hilarious but so adorable. xx

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Cute story.

Aw, this is too cute cute for words! I loved everything. Keep up the awesome work!

Very nice, I like the idea of the amulet imparting it's power to Sofia. Keep it up!

This was super cute! I LOVE that you incorporated the idea that Sofia has basically absorbed her amulet's magic. At this point, I would certainly not be surprised. And the hilarity of Cedric being so shy and uncomfortable with beachwear still cracks me up, and I'm glad you went with it. I think it's definitely true to character. Very heartwarming story, and I'm so glad you wrote it. :)

Great job, Ally! I loved the sliding down the banister part. That was so Sofia. Everyone was in character, which is really important. You nailed them! There were a few minor mistakes, but I'll have to point them out in a message.

I loved it! It was even better than I thought it was going to be. And I had hopes :). Cedric's reaction when Sofia conjured swimwear for him was hilarious. And I loved when he saved her and they both called each other their heroes. It's so true :). And those sleep snuggles were very sweet

Overall, it was just wonderful :)