A good mix of emotions in this chapter. Everyone helping Dipper getting over his negative feelings. It was an interesting visit with the professor, heck some of what she said even reminds me of me. Good that Dipper agreed to visit her again.
The game where they lifted eachother and raced was nice, peaceful.. calm.. happy. Just nice.

Gonna be the most recurring villain huh? Sure hope they have that guillotine ready for next time.

Heh, the manotaurs just ran when Mabbel mentioned their mother. Nice.
Nothing made me happier in this story than when Jenna, with broken teeth, neck pain, blood in her face, crawled away. Such childlike joy.
And the moment was ruined by the bit... wicked witch yet again. Seriously, where is the guillotine?

Someone bring out the guillotine, we need a guillotine for the wicked witch. Chop. Chop.
Heh, good job Mabel for annoying the wicked witch.

HAH! Mabel hit Jenna right in the eye with the grappling hook. That was sooo nice.
That was a dope action scene. Funny too. And Stan and Ford are missing. Wonder if they are chasing her or got hit by her potion.

Did Mabel already catch on? That would be nice.
Hmmm. He called Robbie too. Didn’t she say the perfume doesn’t work on people in love? Maybe it will since it was caused by a potion. Aaand Robbie is immune just like I thought, cool. They even got the police. And Mabel is smarter than I gave her credit for.

Nice to see he resists at least.

Wait what, is there something wrong with the site or did you accidentally publish the same chapter twice? Cuz this is a copy of ch1 for me.

Oof. A lot of what Mabel said about Soos hits home.
Bruh, Dipper is already tricked by the sorceress? New record... no wait, she said something about a potion last time. He’s probably not himself.

Reading about Dipper being mindcontrolled and forced to do stuff he doesn’t want to is just painful. Tbh I’m speedreading a bit... well, maybe a lot. I despise that kind of person and it hurts to read what she’s making people do.
Ugh, I wanna skip to the part where she dies. Altho that probably won’t happen.

So the G.F gang can add Jenna to the list of villain who'll return. Wonder what the next story will be about?

As I’ve said in my previous review, this and your other stories are some of the best fanfics I’ve ever read, period. Everyone is going through different things than they did in the show, but they’re still in character, the plot progression is done very smoothly, and the plot itself is just fantastic. Congrats, my man, can’t wait for the next one.

The story was great and having the satisfaction of Jenna you enjoy your one month break. I can't wait for the next stroy

Man that got tense! Well done as always.
This was s good conclusion, in particular. Very heartwarming. I look forward to your next work

Fantastic story, and a great ending! You better believe I hate Jenna. She’s a great bad guy! Was hoping for some Wendip, but, that’s just my ship. Great job! Can’t wait for the next story!

Soos you just gave me a million more reasons to love you! And I already had a million to begin with! This was a great ending to this story, and gets me excited for more! Can’t wait!

This chapter was a bit more dangerous and murderes the ending was a bit emotional, scary and unexpected but besides from all the blood and fighting it was a pretty good chapter