The weakest and dumbest courier ever, seriously, tossing him over the balcony? is his pip boy empty or something, getting overpowered by someone with regular bones? didn't he get any perks and is his intelligence at one?

you should add in the Brotherhood of Steel and even the NCR as well the win the war and beat the Four Horsemen

I mean I gave it a try but you constantly switching from present to past tense makes this almost unreadable. I can understand it but by god it's a pain to read. I feel like I'd like the story, but the English is definitely not up to snuff.

Never hit a women? Do you relise how dumb that rule would be in the wasteland? Pretty much anyone who can will pull a gun on you, women among them. It would rather be preferd if he said not to pick on those that can't defend themselves.

I have a feeling that the Enclave will destroy the black dogs from the inside later on.

I'd say that the Courier and his allies end the Four Horsemen once and for all! The end of the Black Dog Rebellion is near, soon Vault and his allies will be DEAD! A new age on Eostia will begin.

The Courier and his allies will win the war on Eostia!

Oh, boy I bet Veronica will become part of Six's harem which I'll wait to see/imagine that.

*You quoted fucking H20 Delirious and Cartoonz from Red Dead Redemption 2 Online in chapter 9!*

Hey great chapter i read the entire chapters o give a 50/100 but it's good you really good to make heroes appear in the kuroinu crossovers, can you make a kuroinu/star wars but not like intergalactic wars like a OC who live on earth maybe teenager his a star wars fan boy and love the jedi history and anime otaku one day he go to galaxy's edge attraction to have fun construct his own lightsaber (which lightsaber pieces you make your lightsaber) and choose his own kyber Crystal (what lightsaber color would be to you other than the sith) and he then by all jedi star wars merchandise belt lightsaber hilt belt jedi costume with brown jedi robes and kylo ren lightsaber savin's workshops since it's the only red lightsaber crossguard, when he got out he get isekai in a moment he his unconscious he then wake up in some village by a pretty girl he tell him were he his the pretty girl tell him he his in eostia the oc his shock because he know he his in kuroinu and he can take the shock he his moment later they are attack by monsters than in life and death moment he use the force in one moment he his in shock he force push he go to the house they take care of him he see his lightsaber he ignited the blade came out his lightsaber has become real with the force and lightsaber he can become a jedi and save eostia and maybe have a woman fall in love in the kuroinu world but he need to learn to be a jedi and not the prequel jedi order they have been misguided they have become a failure he will follow Luke Skywalker jedi code to be a better jedi.

Celestine see in her vision eostia downfalls but then she see hope young man with a lightblade to save eostia.

The kylo ren lightsaber his in the hand of vault but he don't know his that lightsaber the oc don't know his vault has the crossguard lightsaber vault don't know how it work whem he ignited when he see the red blade his ambition of the his sex nation boast his morale and he think with his red blade he will be a king or god but he don't know his there his a spark of hope a jedi will end his tyrannies.

Hope you respond for this idea you really good with the kuroinu crossover.

I'd say Arcade resist those bloody Enclave and find refuge to the Courier or New Rome, maybe he can be a valuable ally for assistance.

Thank you my chapter keep up the great work.

I wonder if the allies can used tanks like Sige Tank from Starcraft just in case if Black Dogs used armored giants or heavy armored cavalry against them? I'll just wait to read the next chapter.

Hey buddy, can Aegeus have a pet dog in later chapters because for the memory of my dog that just died on February 23.

This means that Cass likes younger boys since she's 34 in the game