Looking forward to more, and as long as it's not Jon/Daenerys I'll be on board.

Well it has been 6 months and we do not have chapter 3 yet.

On regards to pairings, I am a diehard Jonerys fan, so I hope that Jon and Dany will end up together.

Nice start!

I like it and it reads well so far.
I see people recommending the Dragon Club. It's not a bad story if it wasn't for the blatant and gratuitous bashing of everyone in the Tully family. The assassination of characters to make others shine is just a big No No for me. The childish butchering of Catelyn and Edmure (and basically any character who dared not admire and worship Jon) has rendered that story unreadable for me. I hope this one doesn't go down the same path. That last line has kept me doubting, though. Catelyn never blamed Jon for anything her children did so that was a bit out of character. I hope that trend does not continue. You can make Jon and Jaime great without butchering others

Me gusta tu historia... Aunque la verdad espero que encuentres otro emparejamiento, Margaery no me gusta ni tampoco los Tyrell. Aunque claro que es tu decisión. Saludos y sigue con esto.

Esta historia es buena. solo quisiera que los capítulos fueran más largos.

"I think he would love one, he loves everything you make for him trust me." I reply with tears going down my face.

"Are you sure?" Rhaenys asked softly, now openly crying

Both of them crying?

Someone read your First chapter and loved the idea. Search for "The dragon Cub" I can wait to Discover where you indend to go with this storto.

I like the start of your story.
If you want to read a similar story,
I recommend Dragon cub of Alperez :)

This is a great start I would love if Jamie took JOn under his Wing and taught him the true knight turn away from Cercei became the true knight he is meant to be

I do hope you do a Margaery/Jon for the pairing. mostly becuase I like that pairing and not a lot of people do it.

Frankly i think that you should do Jon/Margaery (and please no harems) mostly because is a ship with few stories and most are still unfinished, and because the Reach is a kingdom full of houses that were and still are Targaryen Loyalists (including the Tyrells themselves), is the second biggest in size (after the North), has a huge (if not the biggest, please correct me here) population and army, and lastly they don't really like the baratheons and lannisters heck the only reason they allied with them was because they have always wanted to be married to the crown and since renly was killed by stannis they saw no other option: the north was going independent so that's out, they hate stannis for obvious reasons, balon greyjoy is also out for obvious reasons, and its not like anybody was aware of Jon's real identity at the time because if they were they would definitely choose him since by virtue of being the legitimate heir of Lyanna and Rhaegar he could get the North, most if not all of the Crownlands (specially the houses of the narrow sea), the loyalist houses of the Riverlands (of which the Blackwoods and Darrys are prominent examples), loyalists houses of Dorne (such as the Daynes, though the Martells can either support him to get vengeance against tywin and the lannisters or remain neutral since they could consider Jon an offence to Elia's memory) and obviously the entire Reach, that alone could give them a huge advantage during the war if not make it a foregone conclusion (plus i really like Margaery and i would like to see your take on her).

Also one last thing i would prefer it if you used the Book universe over the show's for this story, mostly because the later tends to omit and oversimplify a lot and i mean A LOT of the lore, characters and storylines, only to shove a watered down version of said storylines into another character that has nothing to do woth it out of pure convenience (the most egregious example being how Dorne's plot was handled on the show), i mostly mention this because there were many of these storylines and characters that were (in my opinion) unnecessary cut, and one the cases that bothers me the most is actually related to how the tyrells were handled on the show since later seasons try to sell us the idea that Margaery and Loras are the last of the Tyrells when in reality both of them have 2 older brothers: Wyllas who is the firstborn and heir to Highgarden (he takes after Olenna in the sense that he is a shrew politician and player of the game, but he is also a much kinder person than she is) and Garlan who is a knight, founded his own cadet branch of house Tyrell and is married to a Fossoway, plus even if all of Mace's children were to die (which i hope doesn't happens on this story) the Tyrells have several cousins that also carry the name who can inherit after them (so really a situation of somebody like bronn taking over the Reach like he did on the show is very VERY unlikely).

And that's it, these are just my thoughts on the matter and while i understand that ultimately you as the author have the last word i just hope that you could take my thoughts into consideration.

Love the concept of this story and i hope to see more soon.

the dragons cub is a story that is similar to this one...

Love it looking forward to more

Nice