wow! this is great but sad. usually i like this type of story coz harry meet his parent, his loved ine etc but this, james and lily died and sirius and others. no fun. but this story is great. pity just 3 chapter

Too much inner musing by Harry, makes for boredom. And with so many characters we'd know dead or not born yet, or ever, it makes for a bunch of essentially oc's if you have any other characters, except for the death eater sorts.

wow! This is BRILLIANT!

I love your way of dealing with Abraxas hahaha

bonne fic!

I can't even imagine how hard something like this would be! But if Harry can kill off Abraxis BEFORE he can beget Lucius maybe he can cut off the next generation of Death Eaters before they're ever born! Cause THERE WILL be another Dark Lord as most of the rich high ranking Death Eaters escaped justice!

You did a brilliant job in keeping the tenor of this story throughout the three (way too short) chapters. Your Harry was brilliant, strong, creative, pissed off and not afraid to communicate his anger. Charlus was a bit of a disappointment in that he capitulated quickly and wholly to Harry. I wonder if the reversal of positions between Harry and Charlus will actually help Charlus regain his abilities and talents. Harry would benefit from having a strong adult figure in his life. It's safe to say the world you created screams for many more stories from you. Thanks for this very entertaining story.

I like it

A pretty good short AU.

I’ve enjoyed reading this again and still wishing it was longer or at least had a sequel. You have so many stories that it’s hard to find sequels when you do have them, but I’ll try again just to say I tried.

Not too bad, kiddo.

Thanks!

Nice!

xxXxx KUDOS xxXxx : )

Fun story. Thank you.