Lol I can tell you really like Jaune...

You know, you keep contradicting yourself with how powerful everyone is. One chapter Ruby and Yang are about the same, the next Blake and Yang are about the same, the next Ruby is no match for Blake, the next Blake is no match for Yang. Make up your mind man.

Poor Jaune, i mean she was straight up ready to kill her sister (whom she loves) because she thought she was after Weiss. I can only imagine the horrors she inflicted on some random she doesn't really care about.

*I meant my previous comment as a complement*

mAgE And
D dEmOn QuEeN?!

Some interesting stuff here.

I read all of this not real chapter, where's my cookie?

Oh, you know that I'll read until the end.

Because the damn review button is there! And I will use it to my fullest extent until I have nothing to write here.

Also, if I'm not um...preoccupied with a rather large story of mine, then. I'll probably help you get your cult. Ecks Dee.

Anyways, I wish you good luck in your life!

:')

puhhh, what to write about that?
It's certainly nice to know your thoughts to the story and how you feel about it :)
And I still hope you will contuin this story and keep up the great work :D

Please dont leave us hanging on wether or not ruby gets better or if she manages to marry wiess

It's a shame to see this go, but I understand. This was actually a fun little thing to see before all of the events from before. Well done

Great chapter!

The title suddenly made much more sense.

You're probably the first one that did something like this, so good job for confusing and surprising me!

Anyways, will you be doing another story soon? Or will you take a break?

Really enjoyed reading this. Look forward to see what you write next.