can't be a sam jackson Fury without a motherf'er or two

Thank you for sharing this mega-tale - and continued prayers for you and your family's well-being.

This was a fun ride and a good story. I'm not what I would call a big Marvel fan (haven't even seen all of the movies), but I've found HP/Marvel crossovers to be great fun.
Thanks for sharing your creativity.

whoops, plot hole detected. Charles Xavier already knows about the Pensieve by this chapter. harry used it to show him and Magneto how his world ended. they were in there for four hours.

Really cool plot twists in this chapter. However, they left Hela with "flowers" - perhaps "followers" - can you edit the chapters, still?

Wait, where did the iron man three plot go?

You portrayed wade perfectly

That little drop about Luna being hidden with the fae of his reality/universe - I hope you'll follow-up on that.

Alright, so a few hours later, and here I am with my final review. I'm not reviewing chapter sixty-nine, because, you know, that's not a real chapter. Anyway, my final judgement... Generally speaking, this really was a fix it fic. Nearly every villain or every chance for some tension was cut off at the knee. Metaphorically speaking. There are also several times, where you wrote redundant paragraphs. Where you essentially say, the same thing, two, sometimes three times in a row.

Something like this:

"That's great!" He said with a smile. Then he left the room with a grin, a smile on his lips as he went upstairs.

It isn't quit as 'bad' as my example ofcourse, but it happened at least half a dozen times. But considering this is a story with over five hundred thousand words, I figure that's well within acceptable boundaries. I feel that the last two to three chapters are... Well, they feel rushed. It felt like, you wanted to handle it as quickly as possible. There are also so many more things he could have done. Harry doesn't exactly have a need for money at this point, but what about books? What about enchanted items? More brooms? It feels like he overlooked the chance to do so much good. Also, I feel like the confrontations at the last part, where the explanations and such followed, that they were written, just to shock the characters.

Realistically speaking, they should have gotten all together, despite all the excitement, and gotten most of the 'questions' out out of the way. Like, Harry is twice the age of Hermione. I don't see them being as close as they were before. At least, not until a few years have passed. a teenager and a man, twice as old, can relate less, then a young woman in her twenties and a man in his late thirties.

In any case, there's not much else I have to say.

I'm going to take a look at your other stories and if they anywhere near the quality as this one, then I'm sure I won't regret reading them.

Kingdark

Hi,
I'm currently reading your story and I'm enjoying it a lot. As I've said before, it feels like a fix-it-fic in a lot of ways. The grammar is very good and there are hardly any spelling mistakes worth mentioning. Anyway, I wanted to offer you my condolences in regards to your sister's passing. I don't know what I would do if I ever lost my big brother, but you have my sympathy all the same. I've got only nine more chapters to go, before I'm at the end, but it's been one hell of a ride so far.

There is a reason why Harry and Tony SHOULD be in trouble if anyone found out about the x-ray glasses. Since those models didn’t agree to be seen nude, Harry was violating them in the same way as if he had set up hidden cameras in their changing rooms. You can’t argue about nudity among consenting adults when one party doesn’t have the opportunity to consent.

Cool plot twitsts.

Thanks for this amazing story burnable! Loved your take on this crossover and the big differences harry has made in the marvel verse and your interpretations of each of the movie arcs throughout the story. Really enjoyed reading your story and how each of the characters grew as people. Looking forward to reading your next story and future ones. Keep up the amazing work

I've been reading the story, and so far, I'm liking it a lot. The only complaint I have so far, is the lack of tension. It seems very much like a fixit fic, where every flaw is fixed, prevented or overwhelmed.

Kingdark

I love this story! OP Harry in other universes is the best and you did it so well. I cannot wait till you do a a DC version of this. PLEASE make it happen!