| Reviews for The Black Prince |
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   Fax15 chapter 28 . 3h Hermoso! A la espera de más! |
| Ash the Aura Guardian chapter 28 . 22h Oh damn, Voldemort probably made the one mistake he would regret for eternity...he awoke the siscon buried deep within the Demon Emperor. Poor Voldy is beyond salvation now. Also, I hope poor Ophelia finally gets to have the relationship she wants from her brother. Lelouch did her a great disservice by distancing himself from her, and he needs to fix that by spoiling his sister rotten. |
| GinozaTsunemori chapter 1 . 9/12 please update |
| Wendel Santana chapter 28 . 8/30 Continue, pls! |
| Guest chapter 28 . 8/19 harem is the best for lelouch vi brittania |
| The Immortal Siegfried chapter 7 . 8/18 Harem |
| timokahlenberg chapter 28 . 8/11 Well... 1 year since the last ubdate, i fear this autor and Story fell victim to Corona. I hope i am wrong. |
| Ozilla chapter 27 . 8/3 Coatcobra your questions were logical so here are the answers that I think are the answers. Kallen taught Ron that spell. As for Voldy knowing Snape spell maybe he forced Snape to teach him or Snape teach him with his own freewill to gain favor with Voldy. |
| Colt Cobra chapter 27 . 7/31 Two mistakes here. I doubt Ron couldve known Expelliarmus since cuz he's a first year, and that spell is taught in like second year. Secondly, how could Voldemort know about Sectumsempra? Snape created that spell and im pretty sure he was the only who knows about it. I feel like this story is starting to lose it's charm |
| GuitarBOSS chapter 16 . 7/30 Jesus Christ, you jumped like, 6 different sharks in this chapter. |
| GuitarBOSS chapter 11 . 7/30 Why is the hat publicly berating Lelouch for being a slytherin? Calling it poison? The hat doesn't hate any of the houses. In fact the hat had all sorts of good things to say about slytherin when it was sorting Harry in the books. Also, you got the orders of the sortings completely wrong. How can the students be alphabetically listed if the it was Harry Potter - Karin Weasley - Julius Black? That's not alphabetical neither by first names or last names. |
| GuitarBOSS chapter 7 . 7/30 God damn it, how boring. What's the point of having Lelouch interact with this new world if you're just going to force him to interact with old characters instead? You're getting in the way of your own story. Kallen already had her arc with Lelouch, she doesn't add anything here. |
| GuitarBOSS chapter 4 . 7/30 The way you presented the painting thing was really confusing. You make it sound like he picks up painting after the Harry incident, then years pass and then Alice tells him she contacted the police about Harry. You need to explicitly say that the painting stuff was a flashback because as it is, its really weird. Also, your timeline is all screwy. If he got the painting stuff at 9 and then yearS, plural, passed, that would make him 11 at the very least, and he should have gotten his Hogwarts letter by now. |
| GuitarBOSS chapter 3 . 7/30 "Surrey Street" Really? How did you miss the fact that he lives at 4 Privet Drive? A pretty big deal is made out of that address in literally every book. JK spends a lot of time on it. |
| GuitarBOSS chapter 2 . 7/29 Lol, why is there an orphanage in the idyllic suburbs of Little Whinging? |
