Malfoy so cute!

He's really gone?

This was an excellent story. I enjoyed reading it.

To the reviewer who called Hermione the town whore,
I desperately hope you never lose someone you love. You have absolutely no right to judge how someone copes with their loss. Loss is ugly and has no direction, it is like being taking under by a wave and at first your only hope is to latch onto something to bring you to the surface. But really, Hermione is a character, if that is how you treat a person made of words then I can't imagine the judgment you pass on actual people.

like the sexual tension between

I...I cant... I canttttttt...
*still crying, just harder now*

I love this story. love love love it.

YOU COME BACK RIGHT NOW
YOU COME BACK AND FIX WHAT YOU HAVE DONE
NO NO NO NO. NO
SERIOUSLY
FIX THIS! THERES A TYPO HERE

I'm going to flip if you legit kill theo. I dont care how long ago this was finished (I honestly havent checked) but I will make you write him a happy ending! *sobs for days*

my poor poor theory. I hope he at least gets a happy ending *crying of sadness and joy*

My god I am so frustrated with Hermione's behavior. maybe, just maybe don't spread your legs for other men the moment your boyfriend goes missing ,even if he is presumed dead. no matter how lonely or sad you feel, please collect your thoughts, compose your vulnerable thoughts and your emotional state. maybe just maybe don't become the town whore. take your time, a year two years, clear your mental state. you don't always need a man in between your legs to function.

God I am so frustrated with Hermione's behavior by the end of this story. I am like completely done with her. you know maybe just try not to spread your legs for other men the minute you hear your boyfriend is missing, even presumed dead. you are sad and hurt. so collect your thoughts, calm your inner turmoil, clear your mind...take your time...a year...maybe even two before start riding other men. your mental state is vulnerable, give yourself some time before bringing some other guy in your life. you don't always need a man between your legs to function in your life. Hermione just played with Draco, Theo and little Theo's life in this story. Sleeping with people you don't have feelings with to get over a relationship is just cheap, shallow and pathetic. don't be the town whore babe.

Ok. Ok. Ok.

I just don’t even know where to start. Thank you? Yeah. I’ll start there.

I have only cried once reading Fanfiction and this one got me too. I absolutely adored your character development of Hermione. You told the story well. Even though I knew which movie inspired the fic the whole time I was still busting with anticipation to read this as quickly as I could. Theo, ah- my heart, I loved his character and Draco was perfectly flawed as he should be. I love her relationship with the Weasleys and Harry’s friendship staying true. Gah, I’m a mess. I want to keep reading but you ended it beautifully as well.

Wow. Alright. I’m done now. I usually don’t type this much in reviews, but damn.

I LOVED THIS!

That was beautiful. Thank you.

Do you know what else I adored about this story? The authors notes where you give proper credit to your inspirations.

Yeeeeah. You guys, this is literally the friggin movie Pearl Harbor. As in, bits of dialogue and basically the entire story line was lifted from the movie. Its one thing to use another piece of material as a starting off point or as an influence...its another thing to blatantly plaigarize and try to pass it off as your own. Stealing someone elses script and pretending its all your original work is disgusting.