oh that was sooooo good. I love having stain as a hero. and iida finally getting a clue is going to cause some drama that I can't wait to see. the battle was great. I loved how you did it. just perfect. amazing as always. so gotta read it again.

What the CHICKEN is Ida thinking?! :C

If its what I think it is imma just go to Shoto and be like, "Hey, I'm with you."

Also probably get into some fist-fights...

Imma just say I love this chapter
Stain and Izuku, wow! Stain is a new dad!
Cry for Shinsou, like a loooot!
Im Todoroki when he bump Ida's shoulder! :/
just saying

OMG Stain for the win. At first I thought Deku part was super disoriented because of AFO but it was a vision. That means it wasn’t locked into the moon cycle but like how the original quirk was. Was that because of the magnitude of the death? Either way I can’t wait for another chapter. Please update as soon as you can and stay safe and healthy.

Surprise.

I’m back. And ready to review.

Let’s start off by saying that I feel you when you said this was a massive chapter. When you said that in the author’s note that this chapter cost you blood and sweat and tears, I felt your pain and winced in sympathy. I felt that. I still remember the massive writing hangover I dealt with when I heard the milestone chapter for Stages and how it took over a month from me to recover So...*pats your shoulder sympathetically* I feel you.

Sensibly, I said it time and time again. You are the QUEEN of smut. Whether it’s drarry or these two. You are the queen of smut and I never fail to completely melt from the way. I have to ask, do you watch porn? To get ready inspired for certain scenes, do you watch them because I’m so curious?

I think this has to be the hottest scene you’ve done yet.

But damn...this was just intense and crazy. Like this seriously felt like a series finale. Like end of part one and soon we’re getting thrown into part 2. You did such an incredible job

holy balls that was amazing. I am seriously reading this again and again. You never disappoint. I am so excited to see what happens next.

Holy f*cking sh*t! Those are my thoughts after finishing the last sentence oh my God I can’t wait till the next chapter.

Okay, not gonna lie, compared to canon...I like this one better.
Canon made it seem so short and fast, which I can understand, lots of things happen in one second during a fight for your life.
All in all, I love this chapter. :D

So I’m so happy the boys hashed everything out before the villains attack. Gah I’m really worried about Deku, Katsuki and Braindead will be fine but there’s nothing protecting him from the hand brat slowly torturing my favorite green bean to death for shits and giggles. I hope they’re rescued quickly the canon was a bit unclear in how long Katsuki was captive. Please update again soon

As thrilled as I am to see Shinso involved, good Lord, I was not expecting for Izu-chan to be dragged along for the ride, what a twist !
Heavens, I'm pretty nervous for what's going to happen next; might be a rollercoaster of emotions, to be honest. Since he and Kacchan are together - I mean, romantically - if EVER the Villains pick up on this, would they - dear God, I hope not - push Kacchan towards becoming a villain to spare Izu-chan's life? If that happens, I will be crying...for a very long time XS

Amazing chapter as always, thank you so much for sharing and the many recent updates, mighty generous of you X3

Please take care,

Seth's Kiss

PS: Have you seen Boku No Hero Academia the second movie? It. Was. Amazing. And with a couple of very sweet KatsuIzu moments too X3

I SHOULD be studying and doing work. I need to since next week is right around the corner where everything is due and I seriously just want it done and over. However...I promise myself after I get through a few updates, I’ll turn off my devices, shut them away, and try to study as much as possible. I hope

Don’t apologize for taking awhile with the summer chapters. After all, it is the summer and if we- are least those with brains and are smartly cautious- can’t enjoy all the goodness of summer, at least in fanfics our characters can. Now all we need is for the boys/their friends to go for another swim or have a fun pool day, with all barbecue. Ribs, chickens, burgers, and all.

And this was so good. I’m glad they’re having fun and enjoying themselves

It’s kind of sad they have to get attacked
But we need it for character development so lik eh
A-n-d- b-e-c-a-u-s-e- e-v-e-r-y- w-r-I-t-e-r- h-A-s- t-o- t-o-r-c-h-e-r- (?) t-h-e- m-a-I-n- c-h-a-r-a-c-t-e-r-

lol

I have a new song that I think will brighten your day and also get a kick outta it:

"OH JKR SUCKS, SO DOES TRUMP, AND EVERYONE WITH THEM
CRAP CONTINUES TO GET WORSE AND WORSE
AND MOTHER NATURE LAUGHS
OH JKR MASSIVELY SUCKS, AS DOES RACIST COPS
EVERYTHING IS GOING TO SHIT
SO FUCK THE TERMS "BACK TO NORMAL
BUT AT LEAST THANK GOD WE HAVE THE MVPS
SUCH AS FANDOMS LIKE THE ARTISTS AND FANFIC WRITERS
AND BLACK LIVES CONTINUE TOOOOOOOO MATTER"

*takes a slow bow, accepting the applause* I know the shit didn't rhytm but it's been in my head all day long and i just had to share since the following continues to happen:

JRK continues to open her mouth-or tweet in her case-further burying herself in a deeper hole to the point of no return

Trump continues...to be him x10

More and more news makes me wanna sleep forever and forget my responsibilities. But I’ll keep marching forward and doing what I can.

I shared it with my friend, Melissa, and thought you’d get a kick outta it.

So, moving forward to my thoughts. I thought you did a great job. Not a lot of people can handle doing multiple POVs at once, much less in one chapter. And spinning five days in one. Honestly, that’s the way to go. Just drop snippets here and there on daily life on what’s going on, and we see what happens. Maybe that’s what I should do.

But this was so good. Best part was Puppy trying into a dog and bearing his teeth

I really like what you have done with the training camp so far. I love seeing both classes slowly start to get to know everyone better and have them working together. I just love this story in general and am so excited whenever I see a new chapter. You're so detailed in the important ways, really showing everything going on without going overboard and dragging it. Also, side note, I love Let Me Down Slowly and his songs in general. That was a great choice for that scene :)

So I’m assuming that it’s kind of (turned into) Hitoshi’s quirk
Like how sometimes for his quirk -they- word it as a suggestion
So lik Izu’s voice and POV is a suggestion to the persons brain?
Lik fu( I got no words for the pfft-