Kinda felt like you rushed to the end here. So many potentially important plot points that you just blazed past.

I don't think the Maidens can just give their power away like that.

I mean... I can't really enjoy this, my dude. I would highly recommend practicing and perhaps getting someone to proofread your work before posting, because this is just all over the place.

If the next chapter is truly the end I will be very disappointed.

I really hope he survives somehow.

Cardin needs to learn a little humility.

I love Ruby and Yang.

These last few chapters have felt a bit short.
I hope you don't stick TOO close to canon here.

Interesting take, at least until I started to realize I didn’t recognize the, what looked like, crossover references that changed the background of Remnant. Jaune doing a gamer style armory was a little odd since it didn’t really seem to have a reason than rule of cool. I might try to read it all at some point in the future though.

Well that was quick on the update. Seemed pretty much the same as canon, though.

Never heard walnut used as an insult before.

You did well baBE

Oh, Dauntless crossover.

What'll his weapon be, I wonder...

Why have Ozpin tell Pyrrha so early?

Avoid adding more letters like "noooooo" or "fuuuuuuuck", that stuff only happens in cartoons and it sounds pretty bad.