Reviews for The Beauty of Chance
WeberCode chapter 3 . 5/17
canon is a pain. for the uninformed! I am a cruel follower of the canon. I look forward to continuing!
Sly Assassin chapter 3 . 5/3
Just from the first two chapters i can already tell im going to really like this story. Its genuine refreshing to see a story where Kurama and Naruto actually have to develop their friendship. My only 'complaints' would be thats Satsuki isn't behaving like Sasuke would but thats too be expected since this is pre-massacre also, Jinchuuriki Doors are always such a cool concept but I feel like if ur not careful a Jin-Door subplot can easily take things off the rails fast.

One more thing I notice a lot of fem!Character stories make the character 'softer' than their male counter part and I think thats something you should avoid.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/30
Yes please update
CaleDrake chapter 3 . 4/13
I love this story so far!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/11
Looking forward to it g, hope to see a new chap soon.
bobbya1 chapter 1 . 4/11
in this chapter kurama forgot he is a giant fox with zero experience in manipulating people personally.
MrWalkerMan chapter 1 . 4/11
This feels like one of those trashy fics with the angry mob, the all-powerful civilian council, good-guy Kurama that pop-up now and then, but with better grammar. Cliche's are still there, just written better. Tbh, I'm only sticking around because the grammar is much better and, well, Fem!Sasuke FTW!
AkashimaUchiha chapter 3 . 4/10
Its fine honestly, i'm just glad that you're still continuing it. Many good stories being abandoned in this site, this is looking interesting so far. Looking forward for the continuation.
GamerX568 chapter 3 . 4/10
No duh, your Naruto knowledge has holes in it, you use a bunch of Fanon. From Mobs to the Civilian and Shinobi Council's. No civilians could ever get past ANBU and ANBU would definitely be allowed to kill anyone they have proofl is a threat to the security of the village. Anyone trying to kill a Jinchuuriki, dead. Also, the oniy council in Konoha in Canon is the Advisors, which is only Koharu and Homura. Danzo was kicked off after the Uchiha Massacre.
Uzumaki spiral chapter 3 . 4/10
Cmon you old coot bring em chapters
Zabzab chapter 1 . 4/10
We are in 2019 and people still write this kind of stuff? The mob, the ANBU conveniently not being here, the "Civilian Council" and so on and so on. It's, I don't know, like pretending the Earth is flat. Severly outdated and I'll stay polite here and censor the rest of my thoughts.

If you can tolerate this kind of cliché, I suppose it goes. Expect a Mary Sue Naruto with a giant penis and all the bloodlines one van think of and the combo will be complete.

I've honestly no other recommendation other than go back to the board and please, spare us yet another abomination.

Best writing to you.
Serdadu Hatsuki chapter 2 . 3/22
Hi it's been a while y'know? I m waiting you for update your story, here... Lately so many fanfiction has not continued or discontinued, it is very unfortune if it not continued too, i wish you still continue your work here, athough this is my first time i read your work, but i already love your writing style, since my first language is not english, but your writing style make me really easy understand its plot, i like kurama's character here, so funny and naruto's too
keep it to your work, rise and shine

I wish you stay healthy and not sick because the corona pandemic, lately.. stay healthy
Serdadu Hatsuki chapter 1 . 3/22
Hi there! It's been a while, y'know? I m waiting your story to update, lately so many fanfiction has not continued or discontinued too, it is very unfortunate if not continued, altough this is my first time i read your story, but i have already love your writing style. Yet my first language is not english but i understand your story well, really easy to make me understand... keep it to your work, rise and shine!
Apple424 chapter 2 . 7/6/2019
Can’t wait for the next chapter
ThePhenx chapter 2 . 6/29/2019
Don't let this story die pls
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