| Reviews for A Watery Death |
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  Xeria chapter 2 . 10/7/2019 awesome job...loved it |
 AndurilofTolkien chapter 2 . 8/30/2019 good job ;) |
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 8/30/2019 like this |
| NinjaDevil2000 chapter 2 . 8/19/2019 Brilliant story. i absolutely loved it. Well done. |
| L.L.Wayne chapter 2 . 7/15/2019 I would love to know what Genie said to Jasmine... |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/22/2019 Good! I said you needed better punctuation earlier, without telling you what that meant. My bad. Here’s an example: “I believed you were exaggerating,” Jasmine said, turning to Genie, “But not one word you told me is untrue. I’ve always known there was something odd about Jafar!” See, the apostrophes go after the exclamation mark, not before. Same with question marks and periods. ️ |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2019 Good! It could use some punctuation, but overall I like it a lot. Keep up the good work! The story gives me chills |
| only-some-loser chapter 2 . 6/14/2019 I’m always down for Aladdin whump lol |
| Lord of the rings fans chapter 2 . 6/14/2019 Awesome please continue |
| darkandtwistedmind2.0 chapter 1 . 6/9/2019 please continue |
| pashance01 chapter 1 . 6/7/2019 Good story so far |
| only-some-loser chapter 1 . 6/6/2019 This is good! I look forward to the second chapter :) |
| An Unknown Foreign Beauty chapter 1 . 6/6/2019 continue? Pwety plz ? |
| Luna the Wolf Mage chapter 1 . 6/6/2019 So this is exactly what I was looking for XD, just a few days ago I was trying to find one like this thank you! Can’t wait for the second chapter |
