Please update

Lame that you made him a Gryff that's the worst house for him it teaches Harry to never think for himself and be a sheep I'd prefer Puff or Raven for him

Bellatrix Black the AUTHOR? Reminds me of three authors that churn out best sellers that invariably hack off lefties (yes; all three are alive - which means I am NOT referring to the late Tom Clancy) - two of them are Sean Hannity and Greg Jarrett - who have NYT best-selling non-fiction out NOW (the second consecutive in Jarrett's case).

On Bellatrix - Before things turned left for her, she was second ONLY to Lily Evans (eventually Potter) among the witch populace; as a fellow Auror, she would have known Frank - especially if she was trained by Alastor Moody (as was a good three fourths of the active-duty Aurors). she was STILL part of the Longbottom Incident - but as heroine; not one of the perps. Losing your uterus? In a culture that values reproduction as much as Magical Britain? I hope - for THEIR sake - that the Lestrange brothers are dead; Bellatrix doubtless will want their heads; though their stones will do.

Love the idea of Bellatrix driving everyone up the wall with ‘Allo ’Allo references XD

Please update faster!

This is a great story!

Lots of love [for the story (I'm a legit bookworm)],
BG

This story has been pretty interesting so far, and I look forward to seeing where it goes.

I do think that I would have preferred to not have the ten year time skip though. It feels like everything just kind of got put on pause for that time. Bella wrote her books and helped raise Tonks, but that seems like it's about it. It really feels like she should have at least been able to find a way to communicate with Sirius in that time. It just seems like more plot developments should have happened during that time, I guess.

Interesting start, I love the premise but covering the books really isn't working. You are just summarizing them and I have read them so I find that boring. I'm hoping you will either butterfly things enough that we get away from the books or just skip over most of them and get to The Cursed Child and Bella finding out the rest of what happened to her.

Thanks for your hard work!

Nicholas

Oh. Wow, that’s sad. But nice Melanie Martinez reference.

Great story

Really enjoyed this, especially the scenes with Bellatrix. Good to see you adding dimensions to her character. Update soon!

Nice pop culture references for 1991! but no making fun of Kevin Costner's "British accent"?! :)
I especially enjoyed how you re-wrote Harry and Ron without going too far out of their original characters given by Rowling.
Ron & Harry should put pressure on Tonks to open her club to her admirers from other Houses.
-Daniel Azim Pschaida

Another terrific chapter. So Nymphie asked Snape about being in Prince of Thieves and Die Hard. I wouldn't be surprised if Snape perfected the art of cloning. Blast, I forgot about Love Actually and Sense and Sensibility. You know, frankly I think if Snape could’ve been more like Colonel Brandon and less like Hans in Die Hard, he could’ve won Lily over. Long John Barty Junior, that’s a good one. There was a fellow in the 1960s by the name of Long John Baldry. In the 1990s he was best known as the voice of Dr. Robotnik on Sonic the Hedgehog.

There’s a Cerberus in Hogwarts? Hmm, looks like Duo Maxwell will either be displeased about his dog missing or he’s sleeping on the couch again. I stand corrected he is going to be very displeased about his dog being hurt.

Keep up the good work.

} He's been dismissed as Head of the DMLE and shunted over to International Magical Cooperation. A considerable step down, although not as far down as I would have hoped. I was thinking more on the lines of Toilet Attendant."

ROTFL!

You just can't read an ff without the annoying Granger shoving down our throat in every fucking ff. Even when someone else is main lead , even when someone else is paired opposite harry the granger has to be shoved down on everyone's throat. Granger is such an annoying character that it makes me want to skip this ff even when I like harry , tonks and bella character. How hard it is to write an ff not making that annoying Granger Harry's friend. She is bloody control freak , she throws tantrum on everything, she doesn't have any respect to other people's privacy. Ron weasly is infinite times better than granger. I want to read this ff because I like harry, tonks and Bella why u have to shove granger forcefully on everything and make it unbearable to read.