| Reviews for Girls on the Run |
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Angela3000 chapter 12 . 2/21 Nooo i wanted to read more! Ya know im liking thr confusion and uncertainty in their relationdhip right now. Im not sure about blake but weiss not knowing if the things they're doing are genuine or simply an act seems spot on. Thabks for the lovely chap cant wait tq read more |
FiercesomestDefenestrator chapter 12 . 2/18 WEISS, YOU BROUGHT THIS ON YOURSELF. But also being hand fed half a tuna salad is a little much. Can't WAIT to hear what Blake was thinking with that move. 'It was much less than what Weiss had to endure (?) in public' - wow, perfect use of a question mark if I've ever seen one. Side note, is Adam a pressing concern? Blake brought him up. Maybe I've forgotten some plot point- is he visiting soon, or something? Agh, the awkward sleeping arrangement. Yikes. The agony. Hope things go well for them soon. Keep it up! - Fiercesomest |
merendinoemiliano chapter 12 . 2/17 Great chapter. |
Booklover chapter 4 . 2/8 I knew I couldn't trust Illia. I was suspicious of her this entire chapter and I'm pretty sure that ending shows that she drugged Weiss. |
Booklover chapter 3 . 2/8 I luke how you wrote this chapter. I think Weiss handled herself well. |
Booklover chapter 2 . 2/8 I didn't expect that Sun would still follow along. Though having him around should lead to comedy most likely. |
Booklover chapter 1 . 2/8 I'm excited to read this. I can't wait for Weiss to meet Blake's parents. It may take a bit of time but I think the mom at least may warm up to her. I always wanted to read a fic where Weiss meets Blake's parents. |
Fallen Phoenix of Berk chapter 11 . 1/29 Nothing like trying to draw the ire and force action from a terrorist organization (and specifically the a scorned partner) to kickstart a relationship :) Looking forward to the next installment! |
FiercesomestDefenestrator chapter 11 . 1/29 "Today was a long day. We'll talk tomorrow, I promise." -Knife to the heart. Just go on and murder her, Blake. "Don't you always know what to do?" - KALI. She didn't mean it, but THAT BURN. Two deaths and we're not even halfway through the chapter. "her sleep wasn't restful either" - Blaaaaaaaake in addition to her entire quite perilous situation, you left her hanging all night. Of course it wasn't restful. "Are you serious?" - Yeah! Score, Weiss! "You're Weiss Schnee. That makes all the difference." - Lovely line. Nice work. Can Weiss live with that? Can she? Seriously, though, do we get a Weiss POV chapter for this next series of events? Because that's going to be fantastic. Keep it up! - Fiercesomest |
merendinoemiliano chapter 10 . 1/29 Happy new year. |
merendinoemiliano chapter 11 . 1/29 Lovely chapters, charachters are pretty well portrayed both in dialouges and toughts, can't wait to see what they will face and how further volumes will change. |
Coccineus chapter 8 . 1/11 I think it's a bit odd how the kidnapping part was glossed over and no one really cares about Weiss being drugged and abducted. Other than that, I'm enjoying the story. |
Coccineus chapter 1 . 1/11 This is precisely the kind of story I was in the mood for! Most excellent |
GuestMcCarry chapter 10 . 1/6 Awesome update! Already I'm crazy curios as to what their plan of action is involving the White Fang's soldier/ex-friend Ilia. This is a serious braintwister. Here's a thought: use Weiss as bait for a convincing part where she says shelter was given to her by someone else since half of the staff left and refused to be under the same roof as her. Just something to keep in mind. ;) |
FiercesomestDefenestrator chapter 10 . 1/6 Ah, my poor girl. All she wants is a shower. The sparring was fun! Loved the easygoing dialogue of Sun's beforehand too, and Weiss's surprise at it. Ghira demanding she stay was great. Sun at the end is such TROUBLE. Could use a little more body language on his part, I think- Sun's big and open with his gestures usually. Is he trying to be casual with the suggestion? How's the man standing? Is he pure mischief? No? SOLID switch in tone at the very end. I was like, "Ah, hijinks. Hijinks are fun. Or, oh. OH. Alright then." Next is a Blake chapter, right? Ha! Looking forward to seeing how that goes. Keep it up! Welcome back after the holidays, btw! - Fiercesomest |