Reviews for Mahogany |
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linkjames24 chapter 1 . 7/8 Katana wielding sworswoman Yang! Of course. Since in this au Raven and Summer and Tai raised their daughters homeschooled, Yang would be more influenced by her adorable parents Summer and Tai and the hardcore Raven. Also love her sisterly banter with Ruby. Sniper Ruby supporting Yang? I love it. Let me just say Taiyang raised two wonderful women. I love this analytical Yang. Aw. Jaune's treatment of Ruby was adorable. Yang agrees! "Ruby's mom?" Wtf Yang. Shouldn't she call Summer 'mom' too? They suck at raising their girls, Taiyang excempted. Well at least Tai's getting some. Jaunt, NAICE. |
Chris Adair chapter 1 . 6/17 Very sweet and a bit steamy. Good read. Don't forget silver. |
Kyuubi-Titan chapter 1 . 1/6 Smuttynand adorable. Nice. |
deoxeyses chapter 1 . 10/16/2019 Nice |
AlTf4 chapter 1 . 10/10/2019 Remember kids, knocking someone out and kidnapping them is not how you make a marriage proposal. |
LordLoverDuck chapter 1 . 8/3/2019 Only two kids!? I expected more from an Arc Great fic, would love to see more like this |
FluffyNevyn chapter 1 . 7/24/2019 Adorable overload. 100% snore indeed. LOL |
Random O' Panda chapter 1 . 7/19/2019 Mahogany is expensive, you know. Ruby: Oh, so that's how you milk the human cow! |
Abuhin chapter 1 . 7/5/2019 Hilarious. Not accusing you of ripping off, but did the novel "A Brother's Price" have any influence on this? I can see why a bunch of others are upset by the male/female double-standard, but I did see your subtle explanations that this version of Remnant accepts aggressive female-on-male pursuit. So a Yang-centric OT3 version of 'Cherry.' Nice. Though, I would've liked more dialogue of Yang 'negotiating' with Jaune. It was one of my favorite things from Cherry, with Ruby's offers like 'Husbands get unlimited kisses' and 'Imagine what I'll do if you get an A?' Something like 'Who needs the glory of being a Huntsman when you can be the envy of all the boys in Patch?' or 'Say yes and you can grab these whenever I'm home.' |
Beta117 chapter 1 . 6/16/2019 *notices the author namedoes the white guy double take* this is the dude the wrote silver?! |
Deo V chapter 1 . 6/16/2019 So very good. I see filthy Rubes makes a reprise of her role for this story, excellent! |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2019 Me like. Fun fic that is the same tone as the one with Ruby but Yang joins in on the fun. |
aSinglePancake chapter 1 . 6/9/2019 Awwww adorable |
freddy.lane.1 chapter 1 . 6/7/2019 awwwww |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/6/2019 You write moch better without the "art" *cough*porn*cough*. The structure, flow and imagery are all far more superior in stories like "Silver", "Blue", "White" and "Green". I honestly don't know why you would waste your time with inferior erotica that only some of your readers are even legally allowed to visit. |