Reviews for A Deal In the Dark
Am-E the Android chapter 10 . 6/17
Wow! I'm so happy this got an update! I know I'm late for the party, but I just love this story.

I wonder how peace and tranquility could be implemented. Hat kid dies, rainbow and static fill her view, and she sees an alternate version of herself dancing. They stop dancing and begin giving her encouraging words (I don't need to prove myself to anybody, etc.) before waving their hand and things go back to normal. Hat kid is back at the start of the challenge, a bunch of pons are missing from her wallet, and the contract has some edits that Moonjumper can't change. The challenge is easier now, but she can't get the bonuses.

Or maybe hatkid is too skilled to die lol.
AKhaos chapter 10 . 3/20
I was getting kind of worried. Great new chapter. Looking forward to seeing how the Conductor and Grooves devolve to fit in with their double boss fight!
Mr. Mega1423 chapter 10 . 3/18
Awesome. Glad this is back.
Stormknight821 chapter 10 . 3/18
Ooooooooohoohoohoohooh, this is getting good! The question is tho, who's Hat Kid gonna fight next: Conductor or Grooves?
Stormknight821 chapter 9 . 3/4
Please continue this!
ClasherX35 chapter 9 . 12/21/2019
You are such an awesome writer! I hope you continue these stories soon!
Avatarcatz2323 chapter 9 . 10/8/2019
Aaah, I love this story so much! I love how everyone is really in-character, as well as the ways you've written the storyline to go along with it taking place after the game's events. It's really clever and makes me all the more excited to see what you'll do for the rest of it!

I love the relationships Hattie has with everyone; it adds a ton of personality and warmth to the story, and I'm always one for that! Plus, I'm also a fan of a great angst/fluff balance, and I think you've got that down quite well.

Thank you for writing this! Take care of yourself and take your time, and know that you have many people who support you in your efforts.
Mr. Mega1423 chapter 9 . 10/6/2019
Very nice. Very nice indeed.
Sup chapter 9 . 10/5/2019
Long time no see! Glad to know that your writing skills haven't changed a bit! Keep it up and God bless!
SilyaBeeodess chapter 9 . 10/5/2019
You're doing a good job with this! I get what you mean with handling multiple projects. It can be a workout, especially when your motivation is down. Don't feel like you have to push yourself just for updates: While keeping a kind of schedule is good for any writer, it's also important to have inspiration for your work in order to do your best. Keep it up! :)
Katoptris12 chapter 9 . 10/5/2019
I have no idea what to put in other than that I loved this, and can't wait for the eventual betrayal in battle if the birds. Especially after they promised to help out any way they could.
Guest chapter 8 . 9/13/2019
Please update this again soon! I love this story so much!
Guest chapter 8 . 7/19/2019
I wonder with how much more corrupting the time pieces are would they effect Hat Kid at all?
Mad King C chapter 8 . 7/11/2019
I love the story but I’m more curious about the ending with all the corrupted time pieces
Firefrost76 chapter 8 . 7/9/2019
This story has me hooked! I can’t wait to read more! Your Moonjumper is downright chilling and I love his interactions with Snatcher. Why is it that I always put my favorite characters through the wringer? I’m sorry, Snatcher! Still really good writing.
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