| Reviews for Light in the Darkness |
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Guest chapter 17 . 7/16 That was awesome thank you! I can't wait for the next chapter to see how leo and his brothers continue to handle the situation and to possibly find more about the villians. But mostly the brother moments I can't wait till they realize how capable he is even while blind! Also I appreciate the phobia bathroom thing it was really funny and clever! |
sparklydog9 chapter 17 . 7/8 Gahhh! Just who is leading the NeoFoot?! Why is Raph too afraid to tell Leo? I gotta know! Great update, btw! |
Meiloorunmaoy chapter 17 . 7/7 Bro this is such a well developed story! Dude all the personalities of all the characters are spot on. Im lovin this story plot, and leo an raphs brotha love! (Tmnt was one of my favorite shows as a kid, and your writing it to perfection!) |
countrygirl35 chapter 17 . 7/5 loved it, nice writing. can't wait for chapter 18 |
AllShallFade777 chapter 17 . 7/5 Awesome, thanks for the update! The guys are really selling Leo short, lol :P |
AllShallFade777 chapter 16 . 6/3 Looking forward to seeing how everyone reacts when Leo shows them his blind ninja skills! Also hope Leo calls them out for hiding something from him soon... |
countrygirl35 chapter 16 . 5/8 that was amazing, can't wait for your next chapter |
jenny chapter 16 . 5/5 I enjoyed this chapter. I love Leo's tale and how they were flabbergasted that he got them souvenirs from Peru. Poor Leo. I wonder what they're hiding from him. It's going to blow up in their faces when Leo finds out. I don't think he's going into the dojo or outside the lair anytime soon. Keep up the good work, I'm dying to know what happens next. Be well and safe. |
Hatakefire chapter 16 . 5/5 I love how they listened to Leo’s epic story and his explanation of his new ninja senses, and when Leo said he was excited to get back in the Dojo Donnie was like “yeah...someday” all sympathetically lmao. I can’t wait! Thanks for updating! |
Leggolover99 chapter 16 . 5/4 Awesome. We'll worth the wait. Great family interactions and brilliant use of video camera to deal with the concerned karai. Intrigued about the NeoFoot though... His bros are hiding something still... But what?... Random guess, the soldiers are mutants made from turtle DNA?! That would explain the nervousness... But rubbish theories aside, loved this chapter. Looking forward to seeing how the guys continue to adapt to Leo's condition. Take care and thanks for keeping us entertained in these strange times! |
entity9silvergen chapter 16 . 5/4 Awesome chapter! Really glad you actually wrote out what Leo told everyone instead of just skipping over it or summarizing it. |
AllShallFade777 chapter 16 . 5/4 Ooooh, I’m so excited to see where this story is going! So cool. Loved the long chapter. Thanks for the update; I’ve been looking forward to it, since it’s one of the only reliable, good stories I’m following :P (...I really want blueberry pancakes now...) Take care! |
Guest chapter 15 . 4/27 PLEASE PUBLISH THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON! |
leggo lover 99 chapter 15 . 3/30 YAY! April! Casey! And... Oh my gods, Karai just fainted. That is freaking hilarious! I actually burst out laughing at that. Poor confused Leo! Everyone's showing up at once! Right, can I just say what an incredible journey this is. I see the prompt "Leo blind" and get excited, but I have never read anything as incredibly paced and emotionally grabbing as this story. I've long admired your writing skills and your unique ideas, yet this story has taken the cake. Your ability to describe without using sight is no easy feat and one you have pulled off perfectly. I can clearly picture everything that has happened, and yet you have not given any visual prompts. I salute your ability and look forward to actually catching the next update when it comes out. :) ... And someone get Karai some smelling salts or something, she seriously needs to gather what's left of her tattered reputation right now! XD |
leggo lover 99 chapter 14 . 3/30 "hope they would let him feng shui the place up a bit." They better let him after everything he's been through! Okay, hands down, this made me feel emotional and that never happens with stories. Incredible. The closeness of them, the way you describe everything through the sounds and touches creates such a clear view of the scene and really gets us into Leo's new world. And the new lair as the 2K3 lair! Really well tied in with all the changes. This story has so many good elements from all the different incarnations. So well thought out and planned. The flow, the detail, the character interactions are spot on. |