good but to fast

Great story. Looking forward to more - I hope you are able to continue working on it. Even so, thanks for what you've written so far. It's a fun read.

Enjoying the story and getting a kick out of figuring out the occasional cross-overs.

A superb fanfiction, except a few spelling and grammar errors. I would like to see more of it in the future.

I am glad you are not doing god like tech immidiatly. But i would at least like to see a stolen cargo vessel be given to the boffins soon. Crappy hyperdrive, shields, transport rings, and larger scale power systems, for all the nerds to play with. Maybe that one at the top of the pyrimid, that Daniel's ex girlfreind has.

Also the BC 303 is a really stupid design, its like they took a whole bunch of boxes and stapled them together. So if at all posible can the first ship designed by earth, be at least a little streamlined. I know the writers of the show were trying to establish iterative design, but they took it way to far with that pile of boxes.

Ok i could probably go on and on, so i am just going to stop it here.

My 2 cents worth.

Chris.

So far, I have been disappointed. The summary mad me think they might meet culms or Centauri or ferengi or planet of the apes. But so far it just appears to be cannon

Oh man! Seamus Harper... I don't know whether to envy them or pity them. Either way, I love what you're doing with this!

This is painful to read, if you are familiar with stargate I suggest you skip the entire first five or six or more chapters. Not sure yet because I cant be bothered to read more. All he has done so far is make the EXACT SAME DECISIONS AS JACK DOES. And as someone with future knowledge of events its pathetic. I get not too much can change with how the stargate missions will play out because that is the way they explore the addresses. But you're writing, good tho it may be, pales in comparison to the movie and show.

Best sg1 story I've found here so far I hope you keep up with it. My new favorite story on ff.

I am surprised that on the show it was not a requirement to learn the language of the jaffa to at lest a certain level as it is the most common language use in the galaxy and only one used till the ancients is discovered and it took O'Neill and Teal'c the time loop that never ended to learn it and that was out of necessity. So maybe set up there version of sg-1 book camp before they are allowed off world.

Harper eh? Well, lets hope for him there's no Magog kicking around..

Yeah, I gree with you men, The Synthetic Copies were full of potential. And sadly so few fanfictions explored what this means

Fleshed out characters are infinitely more interesting. I like this story very much and the darkness is appropriate to the subjects. RDA kept the series lighter but there is no reason not to explore the darker themes inherent in the topic that the series/movie glossed over.

Glad the copies of them will have more of a purpose than they had in Canon.
Looking forward to more.

feels completly meaningless to add andalites ... sure ernest is a little less crazy but he was just finde in the original anyway so ... waste of words ...

yeah and nothing changes AGAIN ... why do you write this story if you just write down the original story chapter for chapter ... such an incredible waste of time ...