This is so cool! I feel like you have a really good grasp on the characters and this whole storyline is super interesting. I hope you continue.

Wow! Very good story so far! Excited to read more!

One of the most interesting ideas I've ever seen and I eagerly await more although I do wonder how Stevens human half is even alive right now as in the show he was dieing as the Gem acts like his heart.

Hoo boy This shit actually good.

Hey, i was wondering if u could have pink diamond reform in the next chapter. It would make the story very intresting. And if u dont can u do a fanfic of steven getting poofed and PD reforming. keep up thd great fanfic.

Whelp this is certainly something. So many bombshells set off early should make some things easier in the long run though.

Good Chapter!

This is getting good, I was hoping to find a fic when the truth about Pink Diamond to be reveal much earlier than the canon series.

Keep up the good work.

Oh hello there! That's interesting, very interesting. You don't see many Steven splits here, and for a story to start with one...
I wholeheartedly agree that Bismuth would be shocked out of her (possibly repressed) rage by seeing undeniable evidence in form of double Steven.

Speaking of double Steven, while there isn't much officially confirmed information about splitting the two, I've come across a very logically sound interpretation. Though it's not something to put in a review, would you be willing to discuss over a PM?