Hey!
Just wanted to say this is a really great story! I can't wait to see how the conversation between the Pack and Fate goes. To comment on your question in the first chapter (I think it was the first), I would like it if Jacob accepts the imprint. :)

great updates

nice story so far

The way he reacted to the color of her eyes, so legit. After all he is taught that pale skin plus red eyes equal vampire.
Love how he has mixed feelings, he isn’t happy about it but doesn’t blame her. So mature.
Fate is going to be on high guard from now on.
Keep going.

I’ve seen a fair share of both plots, some were good and some weren’t, but I would go with the first.
Keep it coming.

more pleaz