| Reviews for Someone to Care |
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Belbelanne chapter 25 . 10/24/2019 Enjoyed reading your story, can't wait for part two. |
Guest chapter 24 . 8/28/2019 Aaaaaww cute |
flyingpigacorn chapter 23 . 8/28/2019 I don't usually like gender bent stories but this one caught my eye and I'm so glad I read it. It was amazing, keep up the fantastic writing! |
Hidden Circumstance chapter 24 . 8/27/2019 Love it |
Blaney chapter 24 . 8/27/2019 oh no, poor peyton. parker luck just can't let any of them go... I'm glad you had her realize that mr stark's actions were all she needed. I love the family dinner that was so nice. can't wait for the rest. |
Claude Amelia Song chapter 24 . 8/27/2019 awesome beautifully written |
May chapter 23 . 8/11/2019 DUDE, this is awesome. This is awesome. Can't wait for more. |
Blaney chapter 23 . 8/9/2019 dang it more happy tears, I love when we get to see the reminders that being a hero isn't in a vacuum. that their actions affect others. usually we see the negative, but it makes when we see the positive so much better. I love that she blamed dum e |
Hidden Circumstance chapter 23 . 8/6/2019 Really love it |
Krystallian chapter 22 . 7/30/2019 That's it. I'm adopting Flash. And Ned. You can't stop me before I adopt every character you write. |
ALTERego chapter 22 . 7/28/2019 I absolutely love this story to pieces. I think May and Nat’s relationship with Peyton is brilliant. I’d love to see the duo team up. I wouldn’t even be surprised if Nat tried to check up on Peyton (read: stalk) when she goes back out patrolling again. I also love how included May is, I think she is overlooked by a lot of writers. I’m super excited to see this story progress and can’t wait for the next chapter |
Blaney chapter 22 . 7/27/2019 this was an awesome chapter. you have nothing to work about. I would guess you were feeling Peyton's emotions... as a writer it happens, it happened to me when I wrote the end of Peter vs Romanoff, even though I knew I would make a sequel. I'm glad she told May without May finding out on her own. I knew that May would support her. I can't wait for more, including I hope some more of Ms. Nat training her. |
Krystallian chapter 21 . 7/26/2019 Mama Spider and Baby Spider are bonding! I love your writing! Your sentence structure is so natural and beautiful, and I love how you write your scenes and how you connect them! Thank you for writing this amazing piece of work, and I hope you update it soon! |
Krystallian chapter 4 . 7/24/2019 My adopted child Tony Stark is adopting Peyton Parker. Peyton Parker is my adopted granddaughter and I am very proud of her. |
Krystallian chapter 1 . 7/24/2019 I am adopting Tony Stark. |