What a lovely story! The grammar was consistently good, and the storytelling was wonderful. So many warm fuzzies! I'm looking forward to seeing what's next.

great story, thank you ;)

I actually haven’t read or watched Maze Runner but I’ll read it when I get home in August anyway

What? His name is Thanos! That can’t be the last chapter

Ohmergawd

LOVE IT!

So, um. First off, some constructive criticism. You're good at character voices, paying attention to how they act in the movies and extrapolating from that. Most of the action is clear and easy to follow, too. This is very good for one of your first public fanworks.
That said, you have a tendency for needless Author's Notes in the middle of the story - it has a tendency to bring the reader out of the story, reminding them it is one. There's a reason novels don't have constant Author's Notes in the middle of the text (even humor novels tend to put them in footnotes, which are generally beneath the text). So, overall 8/10, a very nice effort. Keep writing! It can only get better with practice.

However, I hate to be the one to have to tell you this, but "Axelia" is a name derived from "Axel", which is a Danish name with its origins in "Absalom", which means "the father is peace". You're thinking of *Alex*, as in Alexander, which does in fact mean "protector of mankind". If your self-insert had been named Alexia, it would have worked. :-)

Oooooh

How could you leave us with a cliffhanger?! Dastardly. Love the story, however.

LOVE IT!

I think you did pretty great with the action!

LOVE IT!

Seems Pietro’s a little interested in Axelia if you know what I mean? ;)

Omg I love this

All the heroes seem intrigued by her
I can’t wait to find out whether she manages to help Pietro and what effect that has