Right after this singularity summons Salter lol then after France summon Jalter funny to have both alters on he's side

More, woof.

I am actually pretty curious how it ends, given your knowledge. I feel like Olga's situation is actually pretty suspenseful! One thing you can do because of how the singularities are separated is really change some of the character resolutions. If you just tell us that ain't going to happen, you can, of course, but it would be more fun to read it happening...

This one has potential. Keep it up, please.

I'm enjoying the story and can't wait for the next chapter, also am I the only one who wonders what it would be like if Marie survives?

...There's one part of this chapter that stood out as being odd to me. Didn't Dan explain in the prior chapter to Olga that Lev was a Demon God Pillar? Did you forget that or is Olga just in denial? I'll be curious to see which it is in the coming confrontations.

As for possible Servants? You could always (eventually) summon one of EMIYA's harem: Erishkigal or Ishtar to boss him around; Illya, Chloe, Miyu, or Sitonai to bring forth BIG BROTHER mode; or perhaps King Protea or Kama so that he can have his own Kohai. But personally? I'd like to see Ushiwakamaru. Not for any plot reason, but just because I've always liked her earnest and kind personality. Plus, she's one of the few Fate waifu that gets MORE clothes as you level her up. I always thought that was interesting.

Hey, don't go calling Best Maid a knockoff! She brought me loads of joy through my early playthrough. :D

Anyways, I'm really enjoying the story so far. I'm looking forward to seeing how you have things play out in this AU.

imma say Watanabe no Tsuna, cause i wanna see dan get confuse about an unknown servant, plus the ibaraki stuff

pls summon gramps. We need king hassan

Have saber alter meet saber alter and Jeanne alter meet Jeanne alter

I agree with the guests summon Tiamat for absolute bullshit.

Definitely a great fic so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Enkidu

So since I’ve enjoyed the story so far I’ll throw in my two cents.

I’m glad to hear that you’re steam lining the story. As every story that so far been based on F/GO seems to get bogged down in the amount of events and other things.
So I’m happy to hear that. Still remember to throw those how just stumbled into fate/this story some where to go.

But otherwise I’ll throw my thoughts into who should be summoned.

Anyway I’ve seen a couple of people say put a Saber on your team.
I do like the idea but what I think would be the more interesting thing to do if your cool with it is to use a Servant that’s already available on JP.
As I think you should summon Benienma as your possible next Servant as she’s not really in any stories yet.
Also she can mess with EMIYA as they be fighting over how rules the kitchen.

But overall I do like the idea of simple putting in the Servant that you’ve gotten to your first bond level ten with. As you showed with kid Gil that they can remember you and that would definitely be something very interesting to see played out in the story. It also adds some personal to the story overall which would be nice if anything.

Anyway that all I have to say. Till next time keep up the good work!

My first thought would be Siegfried for another front liner, but as he'll appear in Orleans it might be good to delay that badass. You could do Medusa or Medea, just to mess with Emiya more. Just keep increasing the number of Fifth Grail War servants he has to deal with. Medusa would round out the party better, but I could see Medea really having some fun moments. If we just go with ALL the potential Servants, at least the ones not needing a specific event (Jeanne Alter, the Swimsuit Servants, Santa Servants, etc), and just choose a favorite, Nobunaga would be fun. I could see her presence annoying Gil and putting your character in a bind considering he was planning on replacing Gil with Nobunaga. Plus, she's eccentric so could be fun. OVerall though, I'm against choosing random 5-Star Waifu as a summon for no reason. I'll vote for Medea, Medusa, and I guess Sasaki would also fit. Medea preferably.

Otherwise, I agree with skipping some of the exposition and tedium involved in some of the singularities. Keep it on the good stuff. Good luck.

Well, since we have two archer, one berserker, one shielder and one caster, maybe a saber like Siegfried or an assassin like Sasaki.