| Reviews for Hero Team: Rainbow Storm |
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Rebel writer scum chapter 4 . 5/13 I hope you continue the story it's a really interesting concept and I can't wait to see where you go with it! |
West Dragon chapter 4 . 3/7 I don't really like the All Might bashing, but it is a good story concept and I look forward to reading more! |
Holios the Demon Companion chapter 4 . 2/23 And miles away a familiar enraged pineapple screamed out in fury, "FUCKING DEKU!" |
NB132 chapter 4 . 11/17/2019 Nice story, hope you write more |
Hmm chapter 4 . 9/17/2019 Fucking I love this fanfic and if it were something I could eat, that'd be my diet for the rest of my life... |
Moderately Mad Moxxi chapter 4 . 7/17/2019 Awesome story so far! I have to say, I'm personally hoping for a redemption arc for All Might, along with Izuku inheriting One For All to bolster his already awesome Quirk. Plus, let's be real, nobody else is really cut out for such awesome power besides our Broccoli Boi, and I think it'd be a cool departure from the Manga that Izuku inherits it after already being powerful and confident in himself. Could make for some interesting situations and repercussions as to how it enhances his wind abilities. That being said, I trust your vision for the story and can't wait to see where it goes! |
AkeenCarter chapter 4 . 7/2/2019 Waiting for the next chapter like... |
JustABird chapter 4 . 6/30/2019 This story is Fantastic ! (Get it ? Like the Fantastic 4..? You know... Because they're a Hero Team too and... Nevermind!) Really love the dynamic of those three, I think that too many story tend to have a large focus on one character only to relegate the others to the background. I can't wait to see the sweet team action & moves Rainbow Storm are gonna come up with! My only proposal would be to develop Mina's and Eijiro's backgrounds. (Like, why is Eijiro so hyped by Crimson Riot, or did Mina's appearance caused her any trouble growing up? Does "Alien Queen" come from this, the same way "Deku" does?) I'm not a writer, so maybe I'm just talking shit without knowing... I just feel like it would give more "flesh" to the story and would show that the three of them all have the same importance in their team and are not just "Izuku plus two". I really hope I didn't came off as insulting, or as trying to write the story for you; I'm pretty sure, given the chapter you've already made that I'm gonna like your story no matter what you decide to do with it. Just wanted you to know how much I liked it. 'Til next time. |
bnhaFAN11 chapter 4 . 4/26/2019 I-I-I nee-ed more! Plz! |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/19/2019 This will be a really nice 'in your face, Bakugo' :D |
Tweepa chapter 4 . 4/19/2019 You have the fun option of showing WHY hero teams aren't popular - jealousy! I love your writing and how you keep the story moving forward at a great pace. I also enjoy the touch of All Might guilt. You've got looots of awesome emotions to play with for future chapters with your solid set up. Keep up the great work! |
Yellowow Foworce Vanilluwu chapter 4 . 4/18/2019 Seems like Rainbow Storm will be making an entrance in Class -A, aye? I'm interested onto what the class' reaction will be (specifically Bakugo) since they won by a storm! Also since we didn't get to see much hero teams in the main series, I'm attached onto what you're gonna do with them. Anyway, good luck with writing and life! |
Saulong8655 chapter 4 . 4/16/2019 Since Izuku is basically an airbender in this story a good idea for him in terms of mobility or debris removal is the air ball that aang likes riding on sometimes. Keep up the good work. |
Run0nSentences chapter 1 . 4/15/2019 Hero team: rainbow storm. Wow. Rainbow. Storm. If that’s not worth at least reading the first chapter, I don’t know what is. |
Arb chapter 4 . 4/13/2019 Haha. Hell yeah |