this was my first and best dragon prince fan fiction that i read. although i already watched season 3 of the dragon prince, I've been waiting for a new chapter to come out ever since. the story plot was great, i loved the characters and the story made me imagine that i was within the scene with the characters. there was a lot of comedy and action that made me want to read more of. i know season 3 is already out but i hope that you make more chapters of this.

p.s. the story was pretty similar to the episodes of dragon prince season 3

Just found this story and I love it. I know this was made way before season 3 actually came out but I really like what you have going here. Like this is what should've been if the creators weren't restricted to 9 episodes. Maybe you could use the actual season 3 as inspiration for what your writing here.
They should've done the idea of the Sun Nexus for a season about Sun, it was a nice touch. Love the idea of High Lords, elven leaders that represent their respective tribe, I also like that you also have them to also get ready for war, not just the Human kingdoms, I kinda thought that was the point: stopping an all out war. I can almost imagine when/if Caleb and Viera capture Callum, they find out that he did Dark Magic, they would purify him with the Sun (which I can imagine will survive since he only used Dark Magic once).
I like that you have Callum getting a spell book, which I wish would've happened when they got to Xadia. I also like that you have some elves knowing about Callum having magic when it shouldn't have been possible for a human. When season 3 came, I was hoping they would meet an antagonistic Elven (don't care what kind) scientist who became an outcast because of his or her disturbing experiments, who becomes obsessed with Callum and wanting to experiment on his or her first 'human who can do primal magic' and chasing him and Rayla all over Xadia. But no such luck.
Just like Lux Aurea is the capital of the Sunfire Elves, Lunaria could be the capital of the Moonshadow Elves where all the buildings are silvery and shades of blue, Moon moths flying around, and of course hidden by a powerful illusion. Silvergrove is one of the small towns of Moonshadow territory.
Since Aanya is now with Rayla and Callum, hopefully after some time with them, they'll figure a way to get her back to her kingdom, if unicorns exist I don't see why they can't have a Pegasus to get her home. Maybe Aanya can bond with a Pegasus to help her through her trauma, figures out that it wasn't the elves who attacked or at least connect the dots, and then the Pegasus takes her home and become lifelong friends. Plus maybe show Aanya's master archery skills.
Maybe use Saleer, the councilman guy who convinced Ezran into giving up the throne to avoid a war with Prince Kasef and putting Viren in charge.
If Xadia truly waged war on the Human Kingdoms I can easily imagine, Sunfire, Moonshadow, and Earthblood are the main ground forces, Tidebounds are Naval and Skywings are Air support. Startouch I'm not sure.
Anyway, I love your version of season 3.
Til next time.

Cette histoire est intéressante je suis très impatiente pour la suite

This story is one of the finest there is in ‘the dragon prince’ fanfiction stories and I can’t wait for the next chapter, that I hope will come out soon.

Oh my gosh this story had my on the edge of my seat I need more of this story plz continue

I just found this story, and I REALLY like it! I wonder what happens next! Looking forward to more! XD

Awesome story I rather doubt that it will IRL turn out to be this dark but it is an awesome story nevertheless. Though I do suggest you change the rating to T it is a bit too dark for a K rated story i should think. Looking forward to the continuation!

i reached the end of this and realized i'd forgotten it wasn't real! epic story man

what an outstanding first chapter

Viren is scheming, Callum and others are dodging big ass birds, elves are quite literary invading and all Ezra wants is peace, jelly tarts and his friends. Yeah... things are gonna be uh, okay? Either way can't wait for more.

Great chapter! Thanks for giving us this to tide us over until season 3. I also added a chapter to my TDP fanfiction. I was wondering if you'd be interested in reviewing it.

Here an idea you should have Opeli acted as A corrupt official antagonist who thinks they shouldn’t get involved with the war theirby manipulating ezran out of xadian Business Which aaravos and Viren take advantage of

I love it so fare here a funny thought why don’t you have callum try a elf impression and either rayla or the queen says why don’t stop saying fellow elves it just make people want to punch you in the face joke is rayla just finds it awkward for someone to say something like that

Ah I love the story so far, hope things get better from everyone. Can't wait for the next chapter.

This is a fantastic story with ample pacing and "screen" time for all relevant characters. The characterization is also well executed, so much so that each character is very distinguishable from each other and it's great to find fanfiction that doesn't lose touch from the original source. I am thoroughly enjoying this story and find myself craving for more chapters. Please do update soon.