I'm late to the party on this fic, but I saw a link to it and here I am. So if you're reading this after all these years, please know that I enjoyed this piece. The writing style was very touching.

Galenchia

I feel like you do a really good job putting Hisoka's perspective into words. It mirrors what a lot of sexually abused people go through in the aftermath. Props for realism and further props for a caring Tsuzuki. 3 More abused people could use folks like him in their lives.

Wow, that was tragic. *sighs* But it was beautiful as well. Such fantastic characterizations are rare.

I love this fic. :)

"Between the two of you, there might be just enough to make one real person. Or maybe all the fake smiles would cancel out all the fake scowls and you'd be left with nothing again. Maybe not - math was never your strong suit."

That was awesomely (is that a word? hmm..) written. I loved the description and emotion you put into it. I'm impressed. Good job!

Man that title made no sense at first but perfect now, you've really got a way with words. Again sad, bittersweet this time though and with an underbelly of something more like happiness cause that smile...I would think means a heack of alot even if it does come 'after'.

Don't know about this Hisoka power bit, though i could see the reasons behind it and the idea of not being so weak/unable to help Tsu in fighting perhaps...you know what I mean...so yeah good good.

Loved the line where Tsu being Hypocrite again...whole paragraph actaully but where you go 'Whoops...' etc etc was amusing.

This is so simple, yet so very accurate and well done. You've really captured Tsuzuki without making him an ansty little brat. Ha ha. Great job! I think I will add this to my favs list! _

So sweet and cute! I love it a whole lot! Such passion, friendship, and brotherly love. Very nicely captured.

Beautiful story. The pov is a bit odd-for a mere moment. Good job with the characters.

nononononono! Mean! It ended! *pout* You purposelly leave all thse evil emotional cliffhangers. But this was soo cute! It took me a bit to figure out who was talking or who he and you was. It was cute, really good, and it was agnsty. How sad! Poor Tsuzuki baby...

It May be small but it can goes a long way.

Ah, I love the lines that you've used in this fic. Dante's line is perfect, as well as the line that good liars believe that their words are the truth.

Oh, so true...

I love all your fics that I've read so far, but for some reason, this is the one that resonates so well in me...I don't know why...

THis is sad but cute. I want a sequel! Little chibis chant " Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!"

This is sweet! Keep going!1

Wow. That's just gold! You created such a deep and multifaceted Tsuzuki. Every line draws out more emotion and you just ~feel~ for both of them. :hands author cookie: Amazing Job & Keep Writing! _

This is just... great