Great chapter

Awesome chapter

Can't wait for next Baratta

Wow! This looks very good. The criminal is coming for Killian, with Liam as bait. Emma and Killian are married. Best of luck with your writing, we appreciate it. I plan to follow you.

A lovely proposal with every detail planned and presented with love. The support of the whole town sharing their love for Emma. The car, the pets, the music, the families, very thoughtful and loving. It was cute they were both nervous. Emma didn’t know exactly why but she knew something was going to happen.

I’m worried for Killian. The criminal he arrested is free. Will he look for Killian? Will Killian be asked to help on the case?

Thanks for this story and for all your Captain Swan. Looking forward to the Series.

I liked Emma’s father, I don’t know what I expected but he seemed like a regular guy. The groupies made it fun. Ruby and Granny were adorable. He and Killian could have fun together I think. I was glad Killian told Emma his sadness and what brought him to Storybrooke. She is already helping him with his guilt and grief.

A Series! Looking forward to it!

Best of luck with the chapter. Great chapter Jennifer Baratta

Bunnies! Adorable, the idea of Killian sliding on his stomach after a runaway was just cute. When it hopped over him it couldn’t be cuter. I was worried for Henry for a bit.

Thanks for the chapter and happy birthday. We appreciate your writing.

Happy birthday Jennifer Baratta

Killian’s romantic gestures are lovely, Emma is truly being cared for and loved. I laughed at the coke dealer - again, the crime in Storybrooke is very odd. What is happening at the college? Should Emma tell Killian more about the call? Is she safe? I don’t know why but I worried about this one. Thanks for the chapter. Looking forward to the rest.

The Coke bust was funny. Poor David. I’m excited to hear the results of MMs pregnancy test. It certainly spurred Emma to think of her future with Killian. I wonder what’s up with Henry? Thanks for the update.

Best chapter yet. Jennifer Baratta

Finally! But not without a lot of interference from their cats. Good chapter.

I’m happy for Emma and Killian and hope they get more time together. The police calls in this town are just crazy! What is happening in the research lab?

Best chapter yet. Jennifer Baratta