Compelling and well written adventure. Thank you.

I love Zorro. The Movies, the TV shows, the comics and last but not least the books.
Now I know this'll sound wierd but my birthday is on June 4th and I had to ideas for Zorro fanfiction stories.
And they take place in the 90s tv show universe.
1. For this first one it has the characters of this show like Don Diego De La Vaga aka Zorro,
Sargent Mendoza,
Felepè
Victoria
And all the others.
But to make this story to work you would have to have seen the show on ABC called Once Upon A Time.
So what happens is Zorro's brother did not die and plotted his revenge by releasing the dark curse on the peubo and the curse takes all of them to Story Brook.
Oh in this story Diego De La Vaga and Victoria are married.
And they have a 5 year old daughter named Elena Victoria De La Vaga.
And Victoria is expecting to have another baby.
Also the Zorro and Once Upon A Time characters team up together.
(After a little misunderstanding and David "Prince charming" and Zorro have a sword fight.)
Meanwhile Alcalde De Soto is trying to reform into a good man and trying to find his happy ending.
2. In this story while the Alcalde and his Lancers are after Zorro and guns are being fired Felepè is accidentally shot and killed.
This story will be dark but has a happy ending.
So Diego in his grief is not himself.
He doesn't sleep well and Zorro has taken over his life.
(Because he doesn't want what happened to Felepè to happen to anyone else.)
And the few times he is Don Diego De La Vaga he snaps and gets angery at his father and friends.
Diego has enough and as Zorro almost kills the Alcalde.
Shouting things to him like "YOU KILLED AN INNOCENT BOY!"
And
"WHY SHOULD I LET YOU LIVE!"
Oh during that time in the story The Alcalde manages to unmask Zorro while fighting him.
Please do these 2 stories for my birthday.

Amazing stories. Amazing. Victoria's version is next?. ;-D

WoW what a story! No words for it.

I thoroughly enjoyed both of your stories.
Thank you for writing such a different story, to those about the TV shows episodes. I was always happy when you updated 5 chapters at a time.
Thanks again.

This was a wonderful story. I loved all the characters and their interplay with each other. I read this story with great interest as it touched on subjects never before written about. I hope you will continue writing

That was well worth the wait.

These updated chapters are wonderful. This is an exciting story and will get more exciting the closer they get to Los Angeles!

This is a great story. I usually read NWZ stories and this one is wonderful. My heart aches for Diego without Victoria but I’m sure he will return to her

Still as amazing as the first story.

Still an amazing story, even from Diego's perspective. And very well written too.

Very interesting story. Very different from the usual.

Okay, now I'm hooked. I read and loved the first story, and now I'm looking forward to more of this one.