Reviews for Vigilante
keitaya chapter 6 . 7/17
Great story.
I am enjoying that Harry isn't just "oh, I am away from the Dursleys and everything is suddenly wonderful"
We are seeing a real reaction. Mm keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more.
Guardianmazur chapter 6 . 7/3
Such a beautiful wee story, it's really interesting to see how tony and Harry's relationship is developing.
Rori Potter chapter 6 . 6/28
Wow. Update soon.
HufflepuffGirlUk chapter 6 . 6/5
please please please please please update
geekymom chapter 6 . 5/31
Fantastic chapter!
Fire Tempest chapter 6 . 5/13
Really looking forward to seeing this develop further, I'm loving Harry/Tony interaction!
MAFITA chapter 6 . 5/11
I am enjoying the story so far. I really hope Tony and Harry's relationship will improve soon... I understand that with Harry being abused, it will take time and a lot of work to get them to a point of trust and comfort, but I'm really looking forward to see them get there! Hope to read you soon! Stay safe and healthy!
Entertainment lover chapter 6 . 5/8
Fantastic chapter
Entertainment lover chapter 5 . 5/8
Awesome chapter. The bonding between Harry and Tony was amazing
mysinger chapter 5 . 5/7
Loving this story! Tony is just as you would expect him to be in this situation, happy, anxious and protective in turns, all the while planning to punish the Dursleys for mistreating Harry. The only one that seems a bit out of character to me is Steve. I don't get his problem with Harry just because Loki was a magic user. Hopefully he comes to his senses. I liked how most of the Avengers were not phased by Harry being a wizard. I am glad that Harry is starting to open up a bit. I wonder what Tony's or Bruce's reaction would be to hearing about the cupboard. Well done!
Blitza chapter 6 . 5/5
What a cute chapter! I love the ending especially
vcj chapter 6 . 5/4
And we see that the system actually works as it should, and a Social Worker has come to investigate the allegations of child abuse. While I also don't know what a social worker would ask in this situation, it seem reasonable enough. It fits the rhythm of the story, so I would call it well written.

We get to see that Harry is starting to get close to Tony. I think it will be while before he really starts to think of Tony as Dad, it think he's on his way.

I can't wait to see both how Harry gets on with the rest of the Avengers, how Harry reacts to learning what the Avengers do, and how Tony and the rest react to what magic can really do, not to mention when they learn what his life is like in the magical world.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
guardianranger chapter 6 . 4/29
Please write more
IsaMisakii chapter 6 . 4/24
Hello ! I like your story and the fact that Tony is Harry's father. I admit I was a little disappointed to see Tony take the fact of being a father as well. I saw him a little more panicked, not being up to par, especially with his lifestyle. Finally he seems to have concerns but they are swept away a little too quickly and it is too bad. I think an adjustment on both sides would have been better. But it's still good and the fact that Tony is clumsy enough to try to get everything that pleases Harry is adorable! I'm not sure that at 12 years old children drink tea? it's quite strange I think.

For the magic part, well I find it very strange that Snape was able to meet Tony so easily. Without forcing with a little spell. Because even Tony was willing to know what he wanted to say to her. I don't think anyone can meet Tony or the Avengers, or go up that fast. In addition even if the characters are OC, I did not really like this Snape who was too quick to reveal the secret of magic. Even if family members are allowed to know. Snape is a spy so he's still suspicious and meticulous in everything he does. So I saw him much more ready to gauge everything before I started speaking. And he left too quickly, without warning. I found it reckless it's a pity. He also lacked the austere side of the character. We only had the asshole version.

Oh of course there are nice critics. Sorry if my English is not good, I'm French haha. I still love the story and how you write it and I can't wait to read more! Thank you and good luck :)
Mar91 chapter 6 . 4/22
A very good chapter
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