Who in there right mind thinks this story line is a good idea?

I hope the stats get condensed soon. As it is I hate it oh so much

Please god tell me the stat sheet isn’t gonna make ME add numbers together the whole story. Because gamer fics where they make the reader figure out all the bonus stuff is gonna get annoying

If there was more frost demons in the Frieza force dont you think they would have shown themselves after frieza died in canon? And you made their starting power level so low, this was supposed to be a naturally strong AS *UCK race, and what is this nonsense of pitting them against a BABY Ouzaru? the frost demons shouldnt even have to struggle against even an ADULT Ouzaru.

Its *hit like that make me drop fic after fic, there is no fidelity to the basic settings of the world set by the canon writter, if you are going to do things like that you should place it in the description so that the immersion is not broken.

As shitty of a test is expect from frost demons

It's a hell of a waste. It started out awesome, but now it's just another dragon ball Z fanfiction that turned out to be garbage. But damn did you kill it stone dead.

you'll make him dependant on the system?

that's... stupid...

with his little to no confidence and looks, not to mention malicious at all...
It's kinda surprising he has a high Charisma... he's not even wise enough...

oh well. it's you story.

i dont like rot just because she got more than 15 years of training when the mc got none she didnt want to date him anymore if the mc got 15 years of traing he would be godike and i men god of destruction at least

I'm starting to hate this 'This is just a game' mindset. Fucking face reality

I think the author doesn't clearly understand Frieza's (and by extension the frost demon race) transformations. Frieza's base form is the 120,000,000 PL form. The other forms are to *suppress* his powers so that he doesn't accidentally lose control of his energy and destroy everything around him. So the MC wouldn't actually have to learn how to transform in order to fight Frieza. But it seems the author thought that Frieza's transformation worked in the same way as the super Saiyan transformations, and so now the PL of every character so far is much lower than it should be. Normally I wouldn't care about such an inaccuracy, except so far this fanfic has been nothing but power levels and transformations, both of which the author has wrong...

His name is Sub? Seriously? Let me guess, he's going to be a masochistic character who doesn't know how to say no, and will be cuckolded his entire life? Really, just name him Zero if the goal was to stick with the cold theme. Zero is a much better name than Sub.

Fast learner should be applied to whatever he spends the most time training, intelligence is a waste. (If he wants int he should just dump points in it, that's a waste of a perk

Damn, this is better that klldarkness’s story by several times over.

Why Earth when he already learned Namekian and their dragonballs have three wishes?