Okay, I've been hunting for a certain Sly Cooper fanfic where Sly has a kid with Carmelita, but this is even better! Loving this so far. Hope you continue soon!

i hope you will continue soon

When I read the title of the story ... I thought ... This title I have the name of one of my favorite movies ... I di read the short introduction ... it was prorpio (more or less) identical to the movie! please continue because I want to know if it ends like movies
P.S. The way Carmelita meets Sly is bizarre but interesting ..

When u updating

This was nice and sweet. Can't wait for Carmelita to learn more about Sly.

I'm really liking this story! More soon please!

Love this story so much!

esto solo hace mas interesantes las cosas

Alright then

me encanta cuando el bebe habla

I think Carmelita getting over what she through too easily. I mean she was drugged and then had sex with her drugger. That's rape. And she wound up pregnant from it. That's something that'd take someone a long time to get over.

I'm confused, if Carmelita was trying to get a confession, wouldn't she have worn a wire, in which case, where was her backup? Why didn't they stop things before they got so far?