please make more chapters

please make more chapters

So I’ve always disliked Canon Ozpin. This one is starting to be even worse then him. As for Naruto being the Brother of Light, I SERIOUSLY hope that’s not the case. This story would take a serious nose dive if it is. Lastly, I honestly don’t like that the legend of Hagoromo is even known. You started this out like Naruto ended up in another world and with how aura and chakra differ as well as magic and the fact no one HAD chakra, it made sense. Stopping here cause I don’t want to start a rant. This chapter just left a bad taste in my mouth.

And you are losing me at this weird mythology of Kaguya, the Sage, and Gods.

oop its gettinng gud!

That was pretty epic

Awesomeness cant wait for update

ozpin thinks naruto is the god of light foolish naruto more the primordial juubi.

Good job keep it up

Awesomeness please continue

Honestly Naruto using the Rinnegan to bring Summer back to life would be the funniest shit ever and would piss Salem off something fierce. The Brothers said that (they) weren't allowed to bring people back from the dead, they never said that someone else couldn't... xD

Great chapter. I enjoy seeing Qrow and Glynda getting closer. Interested to see how things come along, like if Naruto will wield a weapon, like a scythe, due to Qrow's training, and things with Raven and the White Fang.

Also wondering how things will change, and what will become of Amber once the story gets there.

So...will naruto eventually be able to channel all six rinnegan paths/abilities? Cause im pretty sure the asura path would be pretty cool ability for him to utilize in this world. Mechanical weapons kind of seem to be a thing

great chap and glad to see ya (virtually at least) hope you have been well!

I'll def be ready for the next chap when it comess

Not sure how to feel about qrow x glynda but I am still liking this story and hope events pock up soon.