you always manage to almost make me cry. Alissa feeling like she doesnt belong with them really hurts!
You write so incredibly well but my poor heart. Everyone is always so mean and dismissive to her..
Jared is such an asshole honestly.. I actually agree with Lissa, I always found the the whole jared and kim thing a bit weird haha!

And I hate how the imprint makes some of them so whipped and up their imprints asses. Paul and Alissa feel much more real and I love that.

I do want Paul to beat up Jared for being such a dick. Saying she pretends to be hurt for attention and that she deserves the rumours because shes a bitch is fucked up! Hes really been the shitiest Brother..

I feel like with everything Lissa is going to burst soon and its not gonna be pretty.

I love this story so much and I love this chapter and my heart hurts dir poor Alissa. And now the ghost of her grandfather! Like whaaaat?

Please update soon! Cant wait to read more :)

:))

Love the story! Deff wanna learn more about Alissas powers! And of course always fluff!

Cool chap

So excited to read more! _

I had so much fun reading this chapter! Alissa's inner monologue is so fun and interesting to read :)

Nice chap

Dude, I was soo happy to get this update! I really liked it and where you're going with it. Looking forward to the next installment!

Yay! So excited to have a new update! Great chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
I'm especially looking forward to more Paul/Alissa moments. I imagine the fighting isn't actually "all over" though. Poor Alissa. I'm pretty sure the Volturi are going to be pissed about losing Dakota and his powers, and are going to show up at some point.

I really enjoyed this chapter! This is such a well written story and the premise of Alissa's powers are so unique. I can't wait to see where you go with this because I'm so invested in this story and the characters you've created.

Great story, and awful cliffhanger xD Can't wait to read what happens next!

Wow I have to say I loved this update! I love a strong female lead! Not gonna lie this chapter made me like Dakota more than her own dad and kind of humanised or gave him some more depth. Like the idea that the tribe just villainises him when Dakotas just a vamp man tryna do his job.
I'm excited to see what happens next and lowkey wish she could be a vampire but I know Paul would probably rage at that so rip... The scene of her power with her hand made me so hyped though!

I loved this chapter, it was amazing! I love this entire story. I cant wait to see what happens next!

nice chap.

Oh my god, this was intense and I loved every second of it. Gah, I can't believe I now have to wait again! Eagerly looking forward to the next update.