More crack?

Void Cowboy is a student at Winslow? Why did I think he was older and a " basement dweller"

What

Didn't see that this was K. No idea how that works with Worm which is a hellish world, but it's not bad I guess.

This is fun, and bizarre but worth the laughs. Not gonna lie though, the sheep were really fucked up... like Worm levels if fucked up. For some reason I wasn't expecting that from this story. Thanks for writing!

I really liked this story, you mentioned early on how you didn't like how most authors would start a story like this and then kill their muse writing the first few chapters with Taylor just getting a handle on her level 1 powers. To that effect, I love super overpowered level 20 10th tiered mythic Archmage Wizard Taylor and her totally bullshit powers. I love that Legend is her inspiration, heroic and gay. I love that she's super old school polite, charming, confident, gay, and wearing a rad cape. I love that this is all an act, sure it's who she wants to be and by pursuing it that's who she really is but there is a clear distinction between Taylor and Solomon.

Before I continue I just want to say that I understand this story is humor based and shouldn't be taken too seriously despite not really, in my opinion, sliding into crack-fic territory. Having said that I really didn't like chapter 9 The Inevitable Endbringer Fight Part 1. I didn't like how Taylor spent most of her time in the healers' tent handing out healing potions despite any ordinary non-powered human being capable of that. I didn't like how non-seriously all the Australians were taking things, 'no, you can't have more of our limited healing potions because they "taste good."' I didn't mind Taylor not flying in to try and one-v-one the Simurgh, but it annoyed me that she seemed to want to but kept getting distracted by every little thing, read the Spider-Man problem of super heroing, and yes I know that happened in part 2.

I really liked the first 2/3 of the story, but in the last 1/3, you just seem to be pushing for the joke a little too hard. For instance, I much preferred chapter 10 The Inevitable Endbringer Fight Part 2 to chapter 9. Everyone takes the immense amounts of death and horror and non-stop fighting for their lives a little more seriously. Admittedly they were still fighting mutant sheep, which is kind of funny, but not to them since those things are killing people. I also really appreciated how you handled Taylor's mental breakdown. With her shoving all of that off onto 'Taylor' because 'Solomon' is a Hero who doesn't have the time to deal with that when people are dying all around her.

Last thing I want to bring up, the Omakes, they were hit or miss with me. I really liked a couple of them, but the rest was pretty meh. I even outright skipped the Tokusentai ones altogether.

All that having been said, as a Pathfinder player of almost a decade now, and a fan of Worm for the last year or so since I found it. After which I started gobbling up as much good Worm fanfiction as I could get my hands on. I really liked this story and hope you get back to it soon.

Up to this point the humour in this story has been enjoyable for me, edging into absurd while still remaining believable in context. This chapter pushed so far past believable that I had to keep double checking to make sure I had read things properly.

I had a lot of fun reading this, but I can't see myself continuing, the pivot into complete crack at such a late point in the story was too much.

I prefer TaylorShadow Stalker over TaylorLisa or TaylorAmy.

I love it and cant wait for more, I hope you're okay!

Oh my god, a Santa analysis thread, I love this story

Yay . . . another Lesbian!Taylor story . . . as if there weren't enough of those already . . .
Besides that, this story is a rather fun read. I look forward to continuing.

I'm wondering about the big ole plot hole that is Solomon saying she's been, and by now probably graduated, University, while also talking about joining the wards if she's already an adult. Suppose she could just say she was faking being a teenager as more cover for her identity..

That wasn't particularly engaging. Up til now the fics been awesome. But this chapter seemed just set on wringing what little humor was there to death. You're a great writer, but it could have been better.

please stop

Great chapter, I can't wait to see more.